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MoreMercury76
MoreMercury76Lv141yr
2023-03-11 00:05

Trash Another waste of time novel......

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Yabadabadu
YabadabaduLv4

If this is trash then the rest of the trial read is radioactive fallout.

MoreMercury76
MoreMercury76Lv14

Yabadabadu:If this is trash then the rest of the trial read is radioactive fallout.
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Furkan_The_Newbie
Furkan_The_NewbieLv12

I don't know why, in most novels, the divisive parts start after chapter 25. I think that he has not used a similarly beautiful potential properly in this novel. There's a lot of time skips. While there is a lot of space in the story that moves forward 1 year at a time, it feels like at least 10-15 chapters have been skipped. So the process doesn't matter, it's like reading the last chapter directly...

Yabadabadu:If this is trash then the rest of the trial read is radioactive fallout.
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Yabadabadu
YabadabaduLv4

Well after chapter 24 it's a downhill journey, I read the raw novel in google translation as far as chapter 100, and my god it kept getting worse, so I dropped it. P.S- This one did become Radioactive fallout

Furkan_The_Newbie:I don't know why, in most novels, the divisive parts start after chapter 25. I think that he has not used a similarly beautiful potential properly in this novel. There's a lot of time skips. While there is a lot of space in the story that moves forward 1 year at a time, it feels like at least 10-15 chapters have been skipped. So the process doesn't matter, it's like reading the last chapter directly...
Furkan_The_Newbie
Furkan_The_NewbieLv12

Absolutely I agree

Yabadabadu:Well after chapter 24 it's a downhill journey, I read the raw novel in google translation as far as chapter 100, and my god it kept getting worse, so I dropped it. P.S- This one did become Radioactive fallout
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Braidennovel
BraidennovelLv13

Disagree

famus_tem
famus_temLv15

it's because of webnovel's pricing. chapters 24 and 40 are where webnovel starts charging coins, which allows them to make money. I have seen novels where 1-40 is perfect english, and then 41 is Google translated.

Furkan_The_Newbie:I don't know why, in most novels, the divisive parts start after chapter 25. I think that he has not used a similarly beautiful potential properly in this novel. There's a lot of time skips. While there is a lot of space in the story that moves forward 1 year at a time, it feels like at least 10-15 chapters have been skipped. So the process doesn't matter, it's like reading the last chapter directly...
Furkan_The_Newbie
Furkan_The_NewbieLv12

You're right, it makes a lot of sense. I think it doesn't bother me much whether it's translated or not because I'm constantly reading the page by translating it from English to my native language. O7 I think this is a kind of professional deformation. Many people must have experienced this.

famus_tem:it's because of webnovel's pricing. chapters 24 and 40 are where webnovel starts charging coins, which allows them to make money. I have seen novels where 1-40 is perfect english, and then 41 is Google translated.
Furkan_The_Newbie
Furkan_The_NewbieLv12

When reading wrong translations of Google translate, you habitually read the wrongs in their correct form. *

Furkan_The_Newbie:You're right, it makes a lot of sense. I think it doesn't bother me much whether it's translated or not because I'm constantly reading the page by translating it from English to my native language. O7 I think this is a kind of professional deformation. Many people must have experienced this.
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D_Wolf
D_WolfLv1

The first of the new batch that I have read. This one is interesting. We have the concept of luck that all protagonists seem to have in abundance. This is not saying that the author creates several different options giving each a value based and weights chance based on luck. Then rolls a dice to determine the outcome. No the authors arbitrarily assign seemingly impossible positive lucky events over and over again to most protagonists. In this story instead of going that route, we have the protagonist getting a lucky trait that allows him to improve his overall luck as well as to leverage his luck towards increasing the odds of unlikely events occurring. From improving the success rate of various procedures to improving the likelihood of a low probability event that improves his bodies talent permanently. We start off with this guy transmigrating into a somewhat precarious situation in he is in a female disciples room when she then brings her fiance to break their engagement. His presence offends the powerful male and the female now has him on a leash as she is who now provides protection from the male. Normally this would not be all that bad, except that our MC also has a 'system' style interface that allows him to see himself and others. Hers shows that she must be a spy and a demonic cultivator wanting to use him as a cauldron. Fortunately for our MC he is able to steel a certain amount of 'luck value' from those who create some sort of misfortune for him. With this ability his involvement with the demonic female cultivator is not a terrible thing at least not on the short term, as her use of him does not cause him permanent damage at least for now. From this point he goes and joins the alchemy division of the sect. This allows him to fully leverage his luck manipulation talent to build himself up in preparation for separating himself from the female demonic cultivator. From this point forward he is working on his skills, talent, and cultivation level for the next several years. The female leaves after 4 months of using him, which allows him to work on his own cultivation while leveraging his luck to help him. Her being a demonic cultivator he is afraid that if he improves his root talent without some sort of potential cause she mite be able to sense the change and get suspicious. Overall from my perspective I love this story. He is not a protagonist character who has amazing luck where everything is automatically going to go his way. Instead the concept of him manipulating his luck in non-consumable ways satisfies me as a reader.

Manjuan
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JustPassingBy
JustPassingByLv5

I give this story about average 4 star, and 1 star in updating stability. Why only in updating? Because this story is already dropped by the author. There's no ending in here, albeit story up to the latest is still interesting enough to read for me. The last chapter is chapter 276 (in chinese)Here is the prove of author dropping this:New book released: "Cultivating Immortal Path Starting from Getting Married"Sigh, I think many of you might have noticed last month that I really couldn't continue writing this book. In fact, a long time ago, I hit a wall while writing this book. A big part of the reason was my own arrogance. I thought I could write while also coming up with the outline. But in reality, writing without an outline is just suicidal; I can't write a single word. After all, it's impossible to maintain a good writing state every day; there are times when my mind goes blank. And once that happens, it triggers a chain reaction. So even though the new book is just being released now, I actually started working on the outline and setting it up last month.Originally, I thought I would just come up with an ending for this book, but I really don't know what to write anymore. I can only say that the beginning of this book was indeed good, but I didn't manage it well. For the new book, I won't make this kind of arrogant mistake again. Sigh, I won't say much more, afraid of being scolded by everyone. The new book, "Cultivating Immortal Path Starting from Getting Married," was inspired by "Furious Speed," and it's kind of a fantasy version of it. If you like it, you can give it a read. I'm sorry, and I bow my head in apology! Ozr!!!You may notice a familiar title, I think that one is Eternal Life Begins with Taking Wife, also in here. Why I gave that much rating, my gratitude toward the author for this story (the 4 star one)

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