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Dave_Zed6mthBerkomentarCh 92 Counting the Experts in the Human World (5)detailMax-Level Learning Ability: Facing The Cliff And Repenting For 80 YearsFantasi Timur · Girl In Short Skirt- Dave_Zed7mthBerkomentarCh 4 SECOND LIFE
- Dave_Zed1yrDiterbitkan
The plot and mc is fine, but the story is too annoying. The MC is constantly having his plans ruined by annoying side characters.
detailI Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My ProficiencyFantasi Timur · Flying Fatty - Dave_Zed1yrDiterbitkan
- Dave_Zed2yrBerkomentar
Silly question here. What happens when he runs out of bullets?
As for why he didn't purchase more magazines, Alvian felt it was unnecessary. Since he had never missed a single bullet, it would be a waste to buy more. - Dave_Zed2yrBerkomentar
I was hoping this wasn’t the case. I don’t like novels where the MC has a shackle from the beginning like this, where he needs to get powerful all in order to revive someone. I was hoping he would start with a fresh start. All in all, the writing is good, just not for me. Good luck author!
Ch 22 Amethyst(2) - Dave_Zed2yrBerkomentar
How does he know then?
Wain had already evolved once, and the next time it would happen again when he reached level thirty. Wain didn't know what would occur then. No one in his world had reached that level as far as he knew. Only one person had managed to get to level twenty-five in a few months, and that was the maximum. - Dave_Zed2yrBerkomentar
There was never a reason given for not using his stat points
Status Points: 21 - Dave_Zed2yrBerkomentar
It feels like the comment section bled into the novel itself
''''FUCK YOU SIMP!'''' I and the young girl shouted at the same time. - Dave_Zed2yrBalas Ancient_Egyptian
Maybe they are all first gen
In these years the population reached 130 members. And they learned many things like covering their important parts with leaves, made small huts, and eating! - Dave_Zed2yrDiterbitkan
The writing quality is pretty good. Although it’s a bit confusing when describing the inner dialogue. The story flows at a nice slow pace, no plot holes. My main issue is I read up to chapter 50 and the FL has yet to make any significant decision in her personal life. She doesn’t at any point really have a personal choice in what happens to her. Her character doesn’t bother me really, besides for a little over thinking, but the story developement makes for a very passive MC. I prefer a more active MC. Although this might change later in the novel. Thanks for the read
- Dave_Zed2yrDiterbitkan
- Dave_Zed2yrBalas jojohardball
Pretty sure it’s from Psalms, written by David a Jewish king
You need not walk through the valley of the shadow of death with me, for unlike an omnipotent deity, I cannot guarantee you will fear no evil." - Dave_Zed2yrBalas Error_4
Analytical doesn’t need to be so smart, he can slowly think about his situation. Also, he doesn’t really remember anything, he is pretty much a newborn now
Now, however, I had to think hard about resolving my current situation. I was focusing only on restoring myself to peak state, but now that I'm almost there, I should try to analyze the situation and my options. Although I had no clear memory of my past life, I could vaguely recall that I used to rely on my analytical mind many times. - Dave_Zed2yrDiterbitkan
All in all, it was a very interesting read, a really chaotic evil mc. Until Yura came into the picture and it completely broke the immersion for me, every time time she appears he acts completely out of character without her adding any value at all. I understand it might change later, but after a few times I couldn’t keep up the interest