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Gods of Gods in The World of Swords and Magic (DROPPED)

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In the beginning, the God of Zeronity Created the laws of the multiverse, And the rules of the Multiverse are Divine, Astral, Space, Time, Light, spiritual direction, Creation, Love, Void, and more. He Created The Gods. He has no beginning and no end, so they say. The people of the place of Knull 'AKA' The dimension of breakers are people who are not bounded by the rules he created in the multiverse. Only the power of infinity can kill them, and They are an existence that the god of zeronity has not created; yes, they should not have existed in our reality. God does not make them; So where do the breakers come from? Now, let's follow through the adventure of the god of zeronity in another world, the world of swords and magic—the big question is how he got there.

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Chapter 1The God of Zeronity

'Now we see a man with white hair and half of his hair is black he has ruby slit eyes it resembled dragon-like eyes; the man was wearing a black white striped coloured opened chested tuxedo,

while on his neck was a golden chained necklace; the man had a flawless face that could charm any woman who would set their eyes on him. He was the embodiment of perfection.

Also, he has a perfectly defined body; his arms, chest, and every other part of his body are what you can call perfect. He has an 8-pack of abs and is seated in a golden chair with silver stripes. Suddenly the man shouts!

"Seltuis, Come!"

That man Shouts with an angry and frowned face. Why was he angry? Who was the man named Seltuis?

"Yes, father, I am here. What do you need of me?"

'And now we see a man with silver hair wearing battle-like armour? It was coloured white and had black stripes with a symbol on its back that resembles a cross, while the cross has the shape of the infinity symbol.'

"Seltuis, Find me where these worlds coordinates are."

'said the man with seriousness; he was looking right through the eyes of seltuis. The stare that he gave was scarier than death herself.'

'"Yes, Father!"

'Seltuis said that while stuttering seltuis couldn't even look him in the eyes; seltuis was sweating bullets and was afraid of his father's outrage. And the big question is, Why was the man mad?'

'The man then stands up on his chair; we can see his height. He was tall, Seven-point eleven foot tall. It was the height of a god.

"Seltuis, deliver this message to all the gods and angels. We are going to war!"

'Said the man with utmost anger and killing intent; he was mad at who?'

"By your command, father, I will relay this message to the gods and my fellow brothers."

'Seltuis then left, but before leaving, he looked back at his father and said to himself.'

"Father, I hope you can avenge mother, and I hope we can win this war with the Gods."

'Seltuis said clearly with worried eyes; Seltuis then opened the golden and silver striped door and left.'

'The man then walks around the room and finds a bookshelf and grabs the book and throws it at the side and then he looks back at the open frame and sees a red button and presses it, then the frame suddenly opens in half, and it revealed a red and golden striped door.'

"Elaine."

'The man said to himself he remembered a woman;

The woman had Blond hair with a golden necklace on her neck. She was beautiful. If any man could see, they would be mesmerised by her beauty; she

was wearing a pink and white stripe dress and white gloves with golden stripes on her hand. On her feet were high heel boots coloured pink with white stripes on each side, and her whole body was what you could call the perfect woman. She is the embodiment of beauty. In his mind, he was thinking of that woman. (Who is that woman?) Then the man opens the door while thinking about the woman.'

"I better get ready before the meeting starts."

'The man Enters the room. The room was beautiful; it had golden walls with red and white outlines on each side. The room was full of equipment like armour, swords and other stuff; the man then started walking straight toward a beautiful piece of armour;

it had a base colour of gold and secondary colour of silver and had spikey shoulders plates that were coloured golden with signs that the modern language can not understand. It was the language of the gods. And on his back, there was a red cape.'

"It's been a while since I used this armour."

'The man said while putting the armour on.'

"Hmm!?"

'The man was making a questioned face. Why was he making that face?'

"This suit never gets old; Anyways, I better get going before the meeting starts.'

'A few hours later--,

We see the man arrive at a massive golden door. It had a golden base colour, and the secondary colour had a silver and red outline on each side of the vast rectangular door; the man pushed the massive door. He then saw people sitting on golden and silver striped chairs. Who were they?

"The Almighty God of Zeronity, Deus Zero, has arrived. Stand and bow before our Lord and Father!"

'Said the man with long grey hair. He had a beard and a flawless face like the other people in the room; he wore a white and violet striped robe. That covered his whole body. He had a serious expression pasted on his face,

then all the people, including the man, bowed at him. Who were they?'

"Stand up, everyone! Thank you for coming. All of you."

'Said the man now known named Dues; he was observing all the people around the room, including the people currently seated around a golden and silver striped round table. They were ten people around the table. Who are they?

"Brother!"

'Said a little girl with white hair and she has red crimson eyes; she was wearing a red and white battle suit and wearing a black and white boot that had outlines of red mixed, she had a hair clip on her ponytailed style hair, and she had a smile plastered on her face that could mesmerise anyone with how cute the little girl was. She was the embodiment of cuteness; then the little girl jumped on Deus!'

"Ops! Be careful, their matilda, and Please-- Don't jump so suddenly. Warn me first, ok, or you will be grounded for a thousand years.

'Dues said while catching Matilda with a charming smile that can make any woman faint.'

"Ok, big brother, and sorry, I won't do it again, I promise! But please don't ground me."

'Said the girl. She was begging him when she heard him say he will ground she suddenly got the chills.'

"Anyways! Let's start the meeting!"

See you at Chapter 2.

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I'm really sorry about the low notes, but I can't bring myself to give more. Your writing quality leaves greatly to desire, for many reasons. The first one is, your English needs some work. Many typos and misplaced capitalization. Your paragraphs are monstrously long for a web novel. You might want to shorten them to 2 sentences per paragraph. Next is your constant switch between 1st and 3rd person views. You should really choose one and stick to it. Then comes the descriptions. You use many many words, to describe next to nothing. If everything in a room is gold, silver, and red, don't describe the entire room piece by piece. That's just filling. Also, don't use the same subject 3 times in the same sentence, it causes redundancy. Next point now, story development. I feel like you tried to make the story develop, but instead, only monologue your protagonist's actions. Your flow was all busted because of it. Take your time, rushing only brings to scuffed work :) I can see you tried to describe your characters intensely, but all you described was their emotions and what they wear. That leaves next to nothing to your readers on who the character actually is. Give life to your characters. Not just the instant emotion, but how they got there, and what reason they have to be mad/sad/happy. As for world background, unless you describe it in your preceding chapters after the second, there was none. Keep in mind that your first chapters are here to hook your readers. If all they read is that the protagonist is mad, that leaves little want to keep reading. Try describing important stuff, like what is the world they are in. You give names, and call them gods, but gods of what? Give your readers some meat to sink their teeth into. The work needs work, but it could have potential if exploited correctly. Keep working on your style, keep improving, and you could go far :)

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