Ona_Gold

Hello lovelies 👋, Author here 🤓, This is my second story and I hope you can honestly tell me what you think. All types of criticism are welcome (except childish ones). Let me briefly take you through what the story is all about (even though thats what the synopsis is for, lol) It's centered around our main couple, Cassandra and Matthew but the other couples also have major roles to play. Our female lead has trust and abandonment issues which is why she avoids forming close bonds with people and would have ended up being a loner for most of her life if not for her best friend. Our male lead, Matthew doesn't want the vulnerability that comes with having a mate but our Cassandra soft cuteness and innocence makes him rethink his decision. There's a lot of drama and a few sad scenes which all leads to the shocking but refreshing climax of the story. Happy reading lovelies 😘.

Your gift is the motivation for my creation. Give me more motivation. 😇

The plot is intriguing, like seriously. The synopsis compelled me to read it and I was not disappointed 😌. There are a few grammatical errors but no unusual in stories. it's been awhile since I read a romance novel like this one and that's saying something coming from me😅. Keep up the good work, our dear author.

O gosh, this story definitely deserves a five star review. I'm really impressed 😊. The synopsis is eye-catching, the plot is amazing and the story itself is fantastic. Don't stop writing please 🙏, I already added this to my library, awaiting more chapters.

Wow, I'm impressed 😌

I love this introduction 👍

thank you 😊 do you mind telling me what those tweaks might be?

Thank you for your honesty. I'll look into it.

The world building was the first thing that caught my attention. it's simple but intriguing. I love the fact that there was no grammatical errors (that I am sure of) and the plot is wonderful. I got hooked on the first chapter I swear. My only complaint is pace of the story. I've read books like this before and your pacing is quite fast, too fast even. Take us along the ride, we don't want to know what happened, we want to see/read it as it happens. I don't know if you get my drift. That's just my opinion though. Overall, it's a very good book. already added to my library 😊

thanks a lot 😊