BLOOD MUTANT SYSTEM.

The kind of book I love to read. I love how everything keeps unfolding especially with the Granians and all. They are very intelligent, and strong just like the humans or even more than them which makes me like the book even more. The Mc isn't the usual dumb kid we have out there, he is able to think well and come up with great ideas. The writing style is just good, the author's writing style is easy to read and understand, which makes the readers hooked to the story even more. I am anticipating a lot of bloodsheds which makes my blood boil so much, heh. Highly recommendable I must say. Try it out and thank me later. Author Jay, keep up the hard work. 🤭

I want this to become something GRAND. I’ talking vampire system good but don’t drag it to the point we’re it is today. Make me a master piece. Author… be strong. Even if it does not have a lot of attention… stay strong!

I’m up to chapter 45 in the story and wanted to write a review. TL:DR 4.5/10 Characters, plot, powers and world building are all interesting, execution is terrible. Ruined the whole reading experiance This is one of the least concrete stories I’ve read. The powers, world building, and plot are very very interesting. However, the execution was terrible. Timelines of events are so messy and jumbled up it makes it hard to read. The MC doesn’t even feel like the main character at all. Just when I’m getting invested to one character the POV swaps right away. The pacing just feels terrible. Everything feels too fast for no reason, it’s like the author keeps having a change of heart in what they want the story to be. Overall, it just gets harder to read. The plot holes keep adding up, or there’s no foundation for the story to build on.

Gostei da nova história da vida do Ace ele parece ter mais amigos, gostei da idade dele agora é 16 anos embora ele pareça mais maduros que os adolescentes normais, por conta da sede de sangue que ele tem agora e os desafios que irá enfrentar vai combrar bastante de suas emoções tentar manter a cabeça fria

I really like the story but need more chapters! will we see a more consistent upload of chapters in the near future?

Hello, y'all for those people who wanna good review read this:- First of all the writing Quality is good maybe u can find a few mistakes here and there but that won't affect your reading journey. Secondly, we got the story development was amazing although it is a little slow in the first 5 chapters cause the world-building. Thirdly, regarding the character design I have some notes about it, the mc was a weak boy who always got bullied and then he got kidnapped by aliens and he turned into one cool but what I haven't understood was how he accepted all this easily. and in last the world's background, I can describe it in one sentence" diligent about it"

I’m currently 40 something chapters in and this story is truly sorry. Hopefully it gets better but it’s just a worse mvs.

This is a review to let you know what you're getting into. For starters, I want to appreciate those who've left comments and reviews that are helpful. The writing quality isn't top-notch, that I can assure you. I wrote this novel as a bluff, i did not expect it to get this much attention(which i am grateful though) At the moment, I am going back to the first 50 chapters because that's where most of the problems are. I'd appreciate if any of you point out what you'd like to see fixed and rectified. The development, character design and world background get better at chapter 100, but the other chapters are not exactly the best that I can do. For those who have persisted, you have my thanks. Those who are pointing out the issues, I also appreciate you. Thank you for reading the novel and showing this much support.

The idea of the story is excellent and had me invested almost immediately. The plot moves a little fast, but that isn’t much of an issue. Writing quality is pretty good, very few mistakes. Overall, this is an excellent idea, but it’s execution needs refinement. I do not follow the logic for many of the actions the characters take, and plot holes are prevalent, especially in the early chapters. With a bit of rewriting and editing this could be a 5/5 story; keep it up author!

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the mc just a simp with too much coincidence everything that is helping him is plot armor although the mc 18 he should have common sense even in such situations i will not do the things he is doing

The plot is irritating, and the mc never seems to learn his lesson, he keeps doing the same thing that got him in trouble over and over again.

The story is fantastic. Definitely a 10 out of 10 there. The character building and Arc is also definitely a 10 out of 10. World building again 10 out of 10. The English on the other hand, well it's not very good. Regular misspellings and incorrect words being used. With that being said it's not hard to understand what the author was trying to say most of the time. Dont expect the story to follow any scientific laws whatsoever though. Also while the fights are very enjoyable to read, it's almost as if a teenager is describing an anime fight not anything that would be done in real life a lot of times. With all this being said I absolutely love the story and would definitely recommend it. Overall I would score this novel a 9 out of 10. Its truly enjoyable to read, and very descriptive so it's easily visualized by the reader.

The book gives an alluring scope to a young boy who almost lost everything and falls to despair but claws his way to a brighter fate. I like how incompetent they reacted to seeing alarming movement from potential aliens. It's the classic feigned ignorance that plunges the world to a dire consequence.

World building 9/10, I enjoyed how I was able to see the entire event in my head effortlessly thanks to very detailed explanations. Plot 10/10: giving it a 9/10 would be that I am pedantic because the story itself kept me staring at my screen. Character design 9/10: From Ace to Cherry I can't be more involved in a characters life, their personalities remain actively distinct. All in all I have enjoyed so far.