Item: BLOOD MUTANT SYSTEM.
Rating: 4
Author: That_1_Dude

That_1_DudeLv131yr

2023-06-13 12:45

The story is fantastic. Definitely a 10 out of 10 there. The character building and Arc is also definitely a 10 out of 10. World building again 10 out of 10. The English on the other hand, well it's not very good. Regular misspellings and incorrect words being used. With that being said it's not hard to understand what the author was trying to say most of the time. Dont expect the story to follow any scientific laws whatsoever though. Also while the fights are very enjoyable to read, it's almost as if a teenager is describing an anime fight not anything that would be done in real life a lot of times. With all this being said I absolutely love the story and would definitely recommend it. Overall I would score this novel a 9 out of 10. Its truly enjoyable to read, and very descriptive so it's easily visualized by the reader.

BLOOD MUTANT SYSTEM.

joshua_jt3

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381 Chs

Liked by 1 people

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joshua_jt3Author

Thank you for taking time to leave a review, I appreciate it so much. Yes, you are correct about everything, including the English and the fights being described by a teenager (I'm a teenager). The novel's going through editing as I write. I noticed the first chapters had plenty of flaws so every weekend I'll be correcting those errors. Some of the questions asked can only be answered on Discord, for I don't want to give off any spoilers to readers who may come across the comments. Thank you once again, and I'll strive harder to provide a more captivating and error free story.

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That_1_DudeLv13

well my apologies for the teenager comment then. if you would like me to take down this review I can do that.

joshua_jt3:Thank you for taking time to leave a review, I appreciate it so much. Yes, you are correct about everything, including the English and the fights being described by a teenager (I'm a teenager). The novel's going through editing as I write. I noticed the first chapters had plenty of flaws so every weekend I'll be correcting those errors. Some of the questions asked can only be answered on Discord, for I don't want to give off any spoilers to readers who may come across the comments. Thank you once again, and I'll strive harder to provide a more captivating and error free story.

1yr

joshua_jt3Author

No no, I appreciate the review so much. There's no need to apologize, I do explain fights like anime scenes (cause I just started watching it.)

That_1_Dude:well my apologies for the teenager comment then. if you would like me to take down this review I can do that.

1yr

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