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Ruby_banks02
Ruby_banks02Lv132yr
2023-03-30 02:20

The kind of book I love to read. I love how everything keeps unfolding especially with the Granians and all. They are very intelligent, and strong just like the humans or even more than them which makes me like the book even more. The Mc isn't the usual dumb kid we have out there, he is able to think well and come up with great ideas. The writing style is just good, the author's writing style is easy to read and understand, which makes the readers hooked to the story even more. I am anticipating a lot of bloodsheds which makes my blood boil so much, heh. Highly recommendable I must say. Try it out and thank me later. Author Jay, keep up the hard work. 🤭

BLOOD MUTANT SYSTEM.

joshua_jt3
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Nickpants
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I want this to become something GRAND. I’ talking vampire system good but don’t drag it to the point we’re it is today. Make me a master piece. Author… be strong. Even if it does not have a lot of attention… stay strong!

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Adrianmkj
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I’m up to chapter 45 in the story and wanted to write a review. TL:DR 4.5/10 Characters, plot, powers and world building are all interesting, execution is terrible. Ruined the whole reading experiance This is one of the least concrete stories I’ve read. The powers, world building, and plot are very very interesting. However, the execution was terrible. Timelines of events are so messy and jumbled up it makes it hard to read. The MC doesn’t even feel like the main character at all. Just when I’m getting invested to one character the POV swaps right away. The pacing just feels terrible. Everything feels too fast for no reason, it’s like the author keeps having a change of heart in what they want the story to be. Overall, it just gets harder to read. The plot holes keep adding up, or there’s no foundation for the story to build on.

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Diego_Nascimento
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Gostei da nova história da vida do Ace ele parece ter mais amigos, gostei da idade dele agora é 16 anos embora ele pareça mais maduros que os adolescentes normais, por conta da sede de sangue que ele tem agora e os desafios que irá enfrentar vai combrar bastante de suas emoções tentar manter a cabeça fria

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Joey_Bonifate
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I really like the story but need more chapters! will we see a more consistent upload of chapters in the near future?

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hello_sis
hello_sisLv2

Hello, y'all for those people who wanna good review read this:- First of all the writing Quality is good maybe u can find a few mistakes here and there but that won't affect your reading journey. Secondly, we got the story development was amazing although it is a little slow in the first 5 chapters cause the world-building. Thirdly, regarding the character design I have some notes about it, the mc was a weak boy who always got bullied and then he got kidnapped by aliens and he turned into one cool but what I haven't understood was how he accepted all this easily. and in last the world's background, I can describe it in one sentence" diligent about it"

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Devin_Davis_7120
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I’m currently 40 something chapters in and this story is truly sorry. Hopefully it gets better but it’s just a worse mvs.

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joshua_jt3
joshua_jt3Author

This is a review to let you know what you're getting into. For starters, I want to appreciate those who've left comments and reviews that are helpful. The writing quality isn't top-notch, that I can assure you. I wrote this novel as a bluff, i did not expect it to get this much attention(which i am grateful though) At the moment, I am going back to the first 50 chapters because that's where most of the problems are. I'd appreciate if any of you point out what you'd like to see fixed and rectified. The development, character design and world background get better at chapter 100, but the other chapters are not exactly the best that I can do. For those who have persisted, you have my thanks. Those who are pointing out the issues, I also appreciate you. Thank you for reading the novel and showing this much support.

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ShinyTinCan
ShinyTinCanLv13

The idea of the story is excellent and had me invested almost immediately. The plot moves a little fast, but that isn’t much of an issue. Writing quality is pretty good, very few mistakes. Overall, this is an excellent idea, but it’s execution needs refinement. I do not follow the logic for many of the actions the characters take, and plot holes are prevalent, especially in the early chapters. With a bit of rewriting and editing this could be a 5/5 story; keep it up author!

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Omolabi_Daniel
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