A Personal Hell for A Winged Killer (Draft 1)

Definitely a hidden gem. The characters are unique with their own special powers. The story is very comprehensive and the characters are very detailed, so the reader is left wondering about the end of the story. The author is currently editing her story, but I definitely recommend reading it. I'm really curious how it will look when the whole story is complete.

Nice Story! The synopsis is good and I liked the mysterious vibes it gave at the end. Curious to know what all MC will find in her journey and how she would get her memories back. I wonder if there is something mysterious behind it too. All in all, it was a good read and I liked it very much. Keep going author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was so exciting that it almost made me lose track of time. maybe there are many things that I understand a little, but that certainly doesn't stop me from reading. because one thing is certain in this story is.. where there's action, that's where the tension and twists of curiosity occur. keep up, authors 😊👊

The prologue of this immediately sucks one in into mystery, and hopefully, as the chapter count expands, that mystery is fulfilled. The author exhibits clear control of the English language, making for a smooth reading experience, though slightly brought down by the occasional wall of text. As for the story and worldbuilding, I'd say that people who like superpower settings will appreciate this work, as it fits well into the quality expectations of the genre. Character design remains rather enigmatic, but some implicit signs of depth show potential for growth and fleshing out. Good job, author!

Pretty good read so far. Enjoyable and fun. It is still very early for a full review, but I have to say that it's looking really good so far. Well done author!

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I enjoyed reading this so far. The character design is nice and different, I haven't seen something to the main character in a while. Keep on going!

Apart from the parts that are left unexplained which give some readers a hard time understanding the book, I would say that the book is awesome! the plot is sell defined with interesting premises. The grammar is okay and simple to read.

I will try keep this short and simple (cus I talk more than I need most of the time lol) It's a very good story! I don't see any real issues with it, and the only (small) thing I thought should be improved was not repeated again, so that is amazing. I enjoyed reading it and wasn't bored out. There are no grammatical mistakes I have seen so you can be assured that when reading it will be fluid. Dialogues are concise yet informational and descriptions are vivid. I did not feel like wasting my time after reading the chapters and do not regret it at all. Will I continue reading this? Definitely. Have I added it to my library? Of course. Seriously, this is a hidden gem. Don't be fooled by the lack of book cover or if you don't necessarily like the synopsis. This is better than most within its' group!

I read the prologue and the first chapter. I must say author put a lot of effort in it and it's well written. The quality of the novel is top notch and I didn't find much errors in the vocabulary as well. The only drawback I found is that there is no attention grabber moment in the first chapter. Most readers skip the novel after reading the first chapter and synopsis. If the synopsis is interesting enough to let them read more, they'll stay for more chapters. But in this, everything is confusing. The story started off in the present with a little bit of information of MCs back story and her family's tragic end seven years ago. Other than that, nothing interesting came up that intrigued me to read more. Even the synopsis is short with no information about the main plot that might interest someone. Dear Author, your writing quality is good enough to reach readers attention but if the storyline is not interesting. No one will read it. So, try to put things in the first chapter or synopsis like showing a trailer so that more readers will enjoy your novel with proper understanding what's going on. I know it's just a first chapter but put some elements that is attention grabber. Also, please reedit your synopsis and book cover so that it will attract readers indirectly. Thank you! I'm looking forward for your positive response.

The plot is just okay, from the first chapter it's kind of somehow but as it goes it gets interesting... Do not get discouraged that u don't understand what it's all about in the first chapter, just continue and you'll understand. Good job author

While the story is held back by strange word choice, minor plot holes, clunky dialogue and foreshadowing that makes no sense until the pay off, The grammar is good for the most part, the characters are unique and the general premise of the story is good. One of the better web stories I've read in a while.

A very interesting take to the school genre with a solid backstory and great writing that makes me keep reading. The character is realistic and the side character also have their own personality. Kudos to author for a job well done :)

cool story... it;s a long time since i relaxed into a story like this. It's not about the characters or worldbuilding. It's just about the story and a great story at that. The author is an amazing story teller, i got so immersed on those long chapters i lost track of time.

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The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read

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