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I like to create my own world in the novel.
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proking2 years agoBerkomentarOh, that's what he meant. But I don't know what this law is. I guess, I have to read a bit more.
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what does that even mean? I will get my law?
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You mean "I will settle the score with you" right? 🌚
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Can't feel what he's feeling. 🤔 It might be life-threatening, yet it feels not so dangerous.
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It's no fun when the quests are so easy and not life-threatening at all. 🤔 People might get bored at a point because of this. Should've been more creative to create quests that might be interesting and thrilled to read. This is just boring. 🙄
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If you're writing in first pov format, you should write the dialogues in that way too. Try reading some first pov novels to get an idea how they write and describe things along the way.
- proking2 years agoBerkomentar
chapter is too short and I can't grasp what's happening. even if it's a prologue, one should describe something that might give an idea to the reader what this story is about. Otherwise, you should have directly started with chapter 1. that would be better .
- proking2 years agoBerkomentar
who's her?
