this is a smart tactic. whether it is intentional or not, this is an amazing thing. anyone who will search for those hashtags/ tags on any search engine like Google will have a decent chance to encounter this chapter, hence easy promotion of your fanfic

I am interested. only time will tell how good it is. I hope you update soon.

look man, this fanfic is not for me. I hate mj in this fanfic. I would give this a 5 star but like I always to with all marvel fanfic with an obsessive Mary Jane, I give the lowest possible rating with a five star given to 1 aspect that the author provides. in this case, it is writing quality.

this is good, it started off great. I hope it keeps up the quality of the chapter. also do you have the link to the original fanfic/mtl? I would like to read the original to see if it is good or is it like other mtl I read (mostly trash)

author, I hope you update the chapters frequently also, is the shinobi fanfic on hiatus or something?

You can read this if you want but this type of fanfic are very easy to drop. unfortunately I have dropped this. I will sum it up with this points: 1. this story/fanfic is trash. 2. the mc is just a narcissistic dumbass who has very little character that attracts readers to understand and encourage . 3. the translation is just poor in quality, it is difficult to read. There is no flow and consistent story progression. ps. might just read the repel everything fanfic instead

Great so far. writing needs some fine tuning. minor phrasing error. update... I would prefer more frequent world and character design seems good so far. 4/5 for character. Depending on how the story goes this can be either good fanfic or mediocre. Please gor the love of everything good in this world, DO NOT MAKE THE MC A SYSTEM SLAVE OR SYSTEM DEPENDENT .

keep up the good work

great start, I hope it keeps up with the quality and the update is frequent. you should do more Gamer based fanfics because you seem to have very good writing quality for them

Look. I would have given this a 5 star. BECAUSE, it lacks diversity man. I get that the author may have a preference for face-sitting and hairy pussies BUT you must understand that girls in any world don't always have a preference to have a hairy pussy or prefer face-sitting. Frankly, repeating the same ending of fetish makes it boring. And disgusting plush you made the mc a fat boy... really in the naruto world rarely any ninja would prefer a fat partner unless they are an akimichi, same in the real world, rarely people prefer engaging in sex with fat people... yes they may with slightly chubby people but that us the limit with sex when people first meet each other. plus you are making all girls to seem like easy sluts that will drop their guard and have a sex session with someone they met. I honestly think that the author is trying to compensate for something. especially when I keep seeing the same repetitive thing. Also if a man goes to the naruto world they would try to be fit and streamline body type instead of chubby or fat because it makes their life more convenient, from seduction or physical combat capabilities, all is possible if you have a fit body especially in the naruto world...

thanks for the chapter. you upload a new chapter soon

good so far... would be better if more chapters were available. please upload soon

personally, I prefer the homelander one... especially since it is a multiverse-related plus harem.

I have read a lot of fanfics on Webnovel. I have read approximately a couple hundred fanfics from various apps and websites. Unfortunately, I have to give this fanfic such a low rating. I may come back to this fanfic in the future to give a higher rating. For now, here are the reasons for the rating (from most important to least important): 1. The flow of writing is just awful. When reading the fanfic, it is quite difficult to read in a properly as it is very "jumpy" and all over the place. To improve on this, I would suggest making a plan on the overall story (things like events, battles and love interest), as for the conversation between characters imagine or have some you say the dialogues to and see if it sounds good ( it should sound natural and not forced) 2. modify the writing layout. This is a fanfiction, not a primary or secondary school level( 4th- 9th grade education) dialogues scripts. For fanfiction, it should look pleasing to look at, like proper paragraphs and stuff. 3. grammar and punctuation issues, the punctuation don't matter too much, but the grammar needs improvement. if English is not good or not your fluent language then I would recommend sending your drafts through Grammarly.

+1

either dragon or homelander. if you do goblin one then you will need to execute it properly otherwise it will be cliche and boring like many other stories I read. maybe throw in world hopping as that usually brings some interesting situations but if you add world hopping, then please do background info for mc for each world then disclose his identity to the characters before leaving especially the lovers if harem and wants to go with him... if they leave with him then maybe take the lovers family with them since I find it stupid when other authors just take waifus from other universes with considering the waifu' family.

when is the next update

thanks for the chapter. and please don't drop it too soon...