He offered a red lightsaber and cookies and Ahsoka was all for turning dark obvs, Aayla...

I like it. Binged it in one sitting, would have liked it if I began reading this after maybe 6 months where more chapters will be released..

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Sad to see you go. Thanks for your time and effort :)

please put authors comments outside of actual novel. like down by patreon at least so people who dont want any spoilers can skip it :)

I like it, the edit in previous chapter makes sense to me. I wouldn't trust a poacher of any animal to have my back. I have nothing to add in this chapter which for me means that it is good enough to read. One thing I find a bit strange is in previous chapters how fast he went from hunt or be hunted mentality with the dragon without actually knowing at that time if the dragon did not attack him because it was drugged or weak even if it had shown signs of intelligence. It feels like it is missing some interaction before that which would show that they wont actually try to attack someone without a reason. That would have been something I would try to achieve by interaction with a more "not deadly to him"-dragon, perhaps the "cat version" of dragons and have him "attacked" by one while grilling his fish, and end up just giving one to make it go away so any potential massive mother dragon wont be furiously protecting her young. The "cat-like-dragon" would end up calling friends to feed off of his stack and then with him surrounded he would eventually figure out they are another species, wont be so apprehensive of a big deadly "mama bear" mauling him. With some heartwarming "cat" moments with rubbing and purring it is easy to warm up to the beasts. Would be hard to implement in any way though because of how he keeps eel around to ward off any hungry dragon :( I would also not go back and try to add any interaction to warm him up to their species since it would undoubtedly break the flow of the story with atleast adding one or two chapters inbetween, but if you could manage that in a way to not break the flow of the story then leave it be. If you understand what I mean with all I said about what felt a bit like "forced" change of mentality, then you might spot patterns in your writing in the future and improve upon it ^^ The proper way to describe what I meant is that his what would preferably be a gradual change in mentality felt a bit rushed :)

Hmm.. His first thought upon seeing humans for the first time in the new world is to take them out? I mean I would do the same if I knew they were dragon hunters since I am a simp, but just recently he himself took down a dragon that he provoked accidentally in "self defence". Still, I would probably be happy to find humans to talk to, just to be disgusted with them when I found out what type of hunters they are and start scheming their death. Hunting for "sport" instead of necessity or survival is not really acceptable in my books even IRL. Thanks for the chapter ^^

Finally someone with some form of trauma from dying a horrible death instead of shrugging it of in mere moments. I understand killing the dragon since he comes from a time and place where any creature can and will kill you. I hope he sees that the dragons are not mindless beasts soon so he wont hunt them down en masse. Poor dragon :( Its hungry and smell fish, probably dont even like human flesh. If you think about it, when dragons raided to hunt for food for the Red Death they did not bring the dead/unconscious humans with them when hauling food back. We know for sure that they have a refined palate since they wont eat eel even if it was the last food on earth ^^ I hope you wont lose motivation to write since you probably wont see many readers untill you have over 20 chapters released. People will put it in library and wait until it reaches an amount wich can be enough to get one engaged in the story. I like the story, please focus on quality over quantity of release, it is very well written in my opinion and will probably catch many fans of the movies for those who take the time to read after the first chapter.

I am reading. Httyd fanfics are rare, and often drop pretty fast. Very well written, tftc ^^

Did not pay attention to it being a translation at first which is a shame since I cant share inputs that might give some ispiration, still going to though.. I really enjoy the direction of the fanfiction but would probably like some way of incorporationg the fact that demons and evil spirits have always been around in "canon". Lets just say for example that general wizard population is unaware because it would be dealt with in their society by unspeacables who wipes and alters memories of the magicals so that their population dont believe in god because of the bad blood between them (witch hunts and all that). Muggle society has priests who deal with possessions and the like within their limits, any deaths and strangeness are covered up by the DOM so that people wont notice the strange and unnatural deaths which would eventually lead to more muggles praying to a higher power for protection. This would be the wizarding society's revenge against god, having made a much smaller part of society believe in god over a long period of time to weaken said god and eventually kill them when not enough people believes in them. I have fun imagining what directions fanfictions could go, I usually do not share my own opinions because I do not want to potentionally ruin the planned story of the author, by allowning them to take ideas that they do not like in the future and cause them to lose motivation to write because of the messed up story. But since this is a TL I see no harm in sharing my own thoughts that seemed fun in my head but would be hard to implement without plotholes ^^

Like the story, no chinese garbage that I can see yet :) .......................................................................................................

*spoiler* A chance to get medicine gift pack at least twice after first selection within 30 chapters. But saying that gift packs are useless and choosing experience points he can get by killing like 20-30 low tier zombies.. I mean, since one of his talents is to be a lord of his territory, it means that there will come new people who can probably not heal completely by levelling up. Medicine and any medical supplies is crucial in any world where fighting and sickness exist. Maybe he can buy it later but I feel like he has chinese protagonist syndrome :I

It was a good intro, but decided to drop it after mc was frustrating with his chosen stupidity. Not surprised if it is intentional, but that "chinese" protagonist stupidity is not my cup of tea.

Is it not that the ones with the demon slayer mark are all almost dying early because of the price for greater strength? Or is it that Tanjuro's birthmark counts as being born with the mark and they can sustain their strength without perishing young?

Do what you gotta do. Even though it definitely deserves a 5 star rating, cant break authors rules... Give it a go, it is worth reading. ..........................

Not author giving a shameless 5 star review since author wont do it themselves. Interesting setup of the story, would be nice to see how it develops so make sure not to drop the story :)

Scummy author, dropped after reading too much crap you are putting Daphi through. Other than that the story is well made, just that the author is too much of a sadist for me to endure more.

Still recommend to give it a read if you can get over the forced antagonist part :)

In my opinion the whole goblin fiasco should have been skipped for better story flow. According to MC's past life he was the best/deadliest assassin. How can an assassin not know any anti surveilance? At least he should be aware that they were being followed when exiting the Alley. It messed up the story flow and is a very forced way to introduce antagonists in the early part of the story. We already know that since he will probably become part of the golden trio he will become one who will have to face Quirrelmort first year, chill second year since he cant let Ginny suffer because of Voldys diary, right? But more antagonists are already handed to him on a silver platter following years.. Otherwise it is a good story, which I honestly skimmed after getting past the goblin spectacle.

Why not use Triangulation to locate someone with the use of owls when he can teleport to basically anywhere on earth currently? For example, release an owl in New York and then see which direction it flies and map that out in a line and retrieve it. Then go to for example Paris and release an owl and map out in a line the direction and where it intersects with the other straight line direction from New York is where the target is. Then go to roughly the marked area and follow the owl and you will find the person in a few minutes.