Review Detail of Naonoe in Ronald Weasley: I have a Choice System

In my opinion the whole goblin fiasco should have been skipped for better story flow. According to MC's past life he was the best/deadliest assassin. How can an assassin not know any anti surveilance? At least he should be aware that they were being followed when exiting the Alley. It messed up the story flow and is a very forced way to introduce antagonists in the early part of the story. We already know that since he will probably become part of the golden trio he will become one who will have to face Quirrelmort first year, chill second year since he cant let Ginny suffer because of Voldys diary, right? But more antagonists are already handed to him on a silver platter following years.. Otherwise it is a good story, which I honestly skimmed after getting past the goblin spectacle.