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Sub-zero in danmachi

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What is Sub-zero in danmachi

Lisez le roman Sub-zero in danmachi écrit par l'auteur patinhoDEUSVULT publié sur WebNovel. A guy died because of God and to compensate him god reincarnated him in danmachi with the powers and all the experiences of all sub-zero....

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A guy died because of God and to compensate him god reincarnated him in danmachi with the powers and all the experiences of all sub-zero.

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But the problem lay not so much in the problem itself but in the problems that he felt about his depression. It wasn’t just that he was depressed, it was that he was therefore depressing, towards himself and all those around him. Sucking the life out of every happy moment, projecting an arcing aurora of negative energy in a kind of reverse feng-shui as he sulked and skulked about in the corners of rooms His friends tried to include him as best they could, but this only made him feel more depressed, because they were the ones making the effort to drag this morbid, succourless husk out of his own little world, when it was him who should be making the effort. Why should they have to put up with him, me, he thought, and though they would eventually give up the ghost, leaving him content that they no longer felt him burdening them, he would arrive home to contemplate with disdain the way in which he felt left out, out of touch, disconnected, misunderstood. Humour used to be a good defensive mechanism, but as soon as he had become aware it of being a defense mechanism he no longer felt comfortable using it. Better to face up to the facts than employ a deflective irony. But with nothing with which to deflect, and a now acute awareness that an honesty about troubles would only be a burden upon the clearly happy and content people around him, he could only remain gravely silent, a furrowed brow christening his chastened pout. And so he would remain, until.

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ImBluey
ImBlueyLv13ImBluey

Choji:......Strong Neji:........Very Strong Naruto:...Super Strong Madara:..Peak of Strength People who can read this ff and understand it despite its deadly grammar:..*Que One Punch OST*

Fallout_Armageddon
Fallout_ArmageddonLv14Fallout_Armageddon

I'll be blunt it's a solid idea with a good execution with everything other then the biggest part of any story grammar the grammar is so hard to understand that it takes a minute to decipher if you don't have you trusty rosetta stone to decipher these hieroglyphics then don't read that's a but of a hyperbole I'll be honest yes it's hard to read, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't continue it is good, and I'll continue because I've read worse, but yea

BAD_MAN
BAD_MANLv5BAD_MAN

FATALITY............................................................... ....................................................................

ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13ArtoriaPendragon_

Really interesting idea but executed terribly and so many cliche’s it’s not even funny If you just kept it being the mc as subzero then it Would be Cool but then you introduced scorpion which is stupid Also there’s the fact that he taught bell cryokinesis which can’t be taught The story is incredibly hard to read and overall just bad I Hope someone who Can actualy speak english and is good at grammer Could Write something similar like maybe a mortal kombat system? Where you can change to the different mortal kombat characters and have there skills,abilities and knowledge? Sounds like a dope idea i have never seen before Anyways overall this fanfic is trash and a waste of time

Kaberial
KaberialLv5Kaberial

My god it like read a machine translation of a novel. If my nose wasn't bleeding before I started reading this, I would've thought I might have an aneurysm trying to read the story.

ProSpect
ProSpectLv4ProSpect

Ohh the grammar and the wording... its ruins this story... if only the author was better i could give this above 4.5 score. Edit: the grammar made me regret my scoring, so i lowered it even more

DataMonarch
DataMonarchLv4DataMonarch

An amazing idea that was poorly planned and poorly executed. Not really worth a read... If you could even get through the first 2 chapters.

yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14yokedjaguar

read the first sentence. . . . .

RaGnAr_SK
RaGnAr_SKLv4RaGnAr_SK

Scorpion appers out of nowhere.....really dude?....... so much potential wasted...............................................................

Legacy_24
Legacy_24Lv14Legacy_24

Grammar kills the story and it feels really rushed. no character development super short chapters its just not very good imo but the idea was solid

nicehat
nicehatLv3nicehat

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yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14yokedjaguar

Their has only been 2 other ff/novels that made me turn away from reading it and giving it a chance before even reading the full first chapter you're the 3rd.

Bearagamo
BearagamoLv15Bearagamo

The story was very hard to follow and grammatical issues through it all the concept of the story is interesting seeming as sub zero is in danmachi however wen scorpion was introduced it threw it all off as well as teaching bell cryo abilities which should not be possible because that is a bloodline ability of Subzero

gonzalo
gonzaloLv12gonzalo

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Fuck_big
Fuck_bigLv1Fuck_big

Révéler le spoiler

ZHODIAXK
ZHODIAXKLv3ZHODIAXK

Pls UP , , , , , , . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .

Midou_Givanci
Midou_GivanciLv2Midou_Givanci

I will give a 5 Star..... Cause I love your work🥰 .................................................................. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ..

Evil_Turtle58
Evil_Turtle58Lv15Evil_Turtle58

got to be honest not read much but it's a good read and I kind of love how subzero and scorpion are basically best frienemies kind of like baljeet and Buford from Phineas and Ferb

I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv13I_am_inevitable

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ItIswhatItIs
ItIswhatItIsLv4ItIswhatItIs

You cant exactly call it a sub-zero x danmachi fan-fic. But it is what it is. __________________________________________________________________

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