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Sub-zero in danmachi

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What is Sub-zero in danmachi

Lisez le roman Sub-zero in danmachi écrit par l'auteur patinhoDEUSVULT publié sur WebNovel. A guy died because of God and to compensate him god reincarnated him in danmachi with the powers and all the experiences of all sub-zero....

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A guy died because of God and to compensate him god reincarnated him in danmachi with the powers and all the experiences of all sub-zero.

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Aku gak pernah tau kalau ternyata 'dia' adalah kakak sepupunya. Ternyata dia mendekatiku hanya untuk dipermainkan. Aku menjauhinya dan tidak memberitau Dia tentang kandunganku. Tapi semua usahaku sia-sia, dia malah tau kandunganku sudah berumur tiga bulan. Dan makin susah menjauhinya. Sampai akhirnya dia menikahiku. - Iriz Marcel - Aku cemburu ketika melihat gadisku begitu dekat dengan keluarga Fraser. Aku harus mendapatkannya apapun caranya juga menjauhkannya dari keluarga Fraser, Aldo juga Tania. Dia Hanya milikku. Aku menikahinya tiga bulan setelah menghamilinya. Keluarga Fraser menyambut pinanganku dengan suka cita tapi tidak dengannya. Aku memperhatikannya tapi Dia mengacuhkanku. Aku berusaha keras mengontrol diriku agar tidak memarahinya, Dia sedang mengandung bayiku. Aku baru sadar kalau ternyata Fina sering membully istriku. Fina tidak pernah menyukai Iriz karena Iriz sangat dekat dengan Aron. - Axel Lucifer - Aku dekat dengannya lagi. Aku sangat menyayanginya. Seandainya saja aku belum bertunangan, aku ingin Iry jadi milikku seutuhnya. Hmm, ternyata mendekatinya susah, dia tidak bisa membuka hatinya untuk orang lain, kecuali Axel. Jadi iri, Tania juga bukan pilihan yang buruk Kok. - Aldo Fraser - Aku tidak menyangka kalau ternyata Kak Aldo sangat mencintai Iriz, menyayanginya sebagai adiknya ternyata itu hanya kedoknya. Untunglah mas Axel menikahinya. Ia mulai menjaga jarak dengan Iriz. - Tania Kaspar - Aku melihatnya lagi. Tapi Dia sudah bersama Aldo dan Axel. Tapi gak apa-apalah dia belum punya kekasih. Aku kecewa ketika tiba-tiba Axel melayangkan undangan pernikahannya dengannya. - Aron George - - Fina Irving -

Ananda_Alabaster · Fantaisie
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Absorbing Her Darkness

Love is "Growing Together". Love is "Realizing that a flaw makes each other perfect." Love has countless definitions. Reveal the defi…. PROLOGUE The story takes place in the beautiful Indian cEKANSHity of Dehradun. It is the twisted romance of BHAIRAVI (aka AARNA). The novel explores college life! Here, Bhairavi changed her name to hide her identity. Her code name is Aarna. Why? Let's take a look together. The story will be told from the point of view of both main actors. Sometimes also the author's point of view. You will be informed about the POV at the beginning of each chapter. As I am busy with my college and studies, parts will be published every alternate day including Sunday. [The characters and plot are only the author's imagination. No one is harmed in the real world.] PROLOGUE: (flash of what happens later in the story, it changes fate all) Author's POV: She walked quietly through the dark corridor of the college. She didn't want to leave. She loved the city. She loved the people who live here. She loved the air and everything! Since the electricity had been cut off, it was completely dark. It also thundered. She could hear her ankles jingling as she moved. She wore a floral print skirt and a flat crop top, leaving her dark brown hair down to her upper waist. She was forcefully heading to the administrative office to collect her TC. A tear welled up in her eye because no she wanted to go back to her past life. She hated it. And after coming to this city, she hated it even more. She walked slowly and wiped her tears with her left hand. “BHAIRAVI!!”, someone called from behind. She stood motionless as thoughts clouded her mind. No. No one can know who I am. I don't want them to know my real name. That will make it harder for me.. She turned with an absent mind. Like her she answered the name, the person in front of her having just been confirmed in her true identity. Her eyes were full of tears, so she couldn't see the person clearly. She focused the torchlight on him. Ekansh. who else would it be? He stared at her. He had no idea of ​​her pain. She had always been a mystery to him. And he loved mysteries. So he wanted to solve it. He never gives up until he finds his roots. And he managed to find the roots of this mystery. “Bhairavi,” he said calmly, this time slowly pacing back and forth towards her. "How do you know my real name?" she asked as her heart rate rose. He was standing very close to her. His face tilted parallel to hers. The gap was less than a few centimeters. She shivered as her eyes caught his. He grabbed her waist with his left hand to erase the remaining gap. She was breathing hard because she was tired from crying. And now his actions made her knees buckle. “I love you Bhairavi,” he said, stroking her cheek with his right thumb. She didn't know how to answer. She didn't want one more thing to be added to the list she had to leave behind. When she didn't answer, he realized she was in pain. Now he could only see her tears flowing faster. He lowered his face slightly to capture her lips. Sometimes falling in love is the easiest thing. How far would you go to save it?

Sudha_Rana_6772 · Fantaisie
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ImBluey
ImBlueyLv13ImBluey

Choji:......Strong Neji:........Very Strong Naruto:...Super Strong Madara:..Peak of Strength People who can read this ff and understand it despite its deadly grammar:..*Que One Punch OST*

Fallout_Armageddon
Fallout_ArmageddonLv14Fallout_Armageddon

I'll be blunt it's a solid idea with a good execution with everything other then the biggest part of any story grammar the grammar is so hard to understand that it takes a minute to decipher if you don't have you trusty rosetta stone to decipher these hieroglyphics then don't read that's a but of a hyperbole I'll be honest yes it's hard to read, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't continue it is good, and I'll continue because I've read worse, but yea

In_destructible
In_destructibleLv5In_destructible

FATALITY............................................................... ....................................................................

ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13ArtoriaPendragon_

Really interesting idea but executed terribly and so many cliche’s it’s not even funny If you just kept it being the mc as subzero then it Would be Cool but then you introduced scorpion which is stupid Also there’s the fact that he taught bell cryokinesis which can’t be taught The story is incredibly hard to read and overall just bad I Hope someone who Can actualy speak english and is good at grammer Could Write something similar like maybe a mortal kombat system? Where you can change to the different mortal kombat characters and have there skills,abilities and knowledge? Sounds like a dope idea i have never seen before Anyways overall this fanfic is trash and a waste of time

Kaberial
KaberialLv5Kaberial

My god it like read a machine translation of a novel. If my nose wasn't bleeding before I started reading this, I would've thought I might have an aneurysm trying to read the story.

ProSpect
ProSpectLv4ProSpect

Ohh the grammar and the wording... its ruins this story... if only the author was better i could give this above 4.5 score. Edit: the grammar made me regret my scoring, so i lowered it even more

DataMonarch
DataMonarchLv4DataMonarch

An amazing idea that was poorly planned and poorly executed. Not really worth a read... If you could even get through the first 2 chapters.

yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14yokedjaguar

read the first sentence. . . . .

RaGnAr_SK
RaGnAr_SKLv4RaGnAr_SK

Scorpion appers out of nowhere.....really dude?....... so much potential wasted...............................................................

Legacy_24
Legacy_24Lv14Legacy_24

Grammar kills the story and it feels really rushed. no character development super short chapters its just not very good imo but the idea was solid

nicehat
nicehatLv3nicehat

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yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14yokedjaguar

Their has only been 2 other ff/novels that made me turn away from reading it and giving it a chance before even reading the full first chapter you're the 3rd.

Bearagamo
BearagamoLv15Bearagamo

The story was very hard to follow and grammatical issues through it all the concept of the story is interesting seeming as sub zero is in danmachi however wen scorpion was introduced it threw it all off as well as teaching bell cryo abilities which should not be possible because that is a bloodline ability of Subzero

gonzalo
gonzaloLv12gonzalo

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Fuck_big
Fuck_bigLv1Fuck_big

Révéler le spoiler

ZHODIAXK
ZHODIAXKLv3ZHODIAXK

Pls UP , , , , , , . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .

Midou_Givanci
Midou_GivanciLv2Midou_Givanci

I will give a 5 Star..... Cause I love your work🥰 .................................................................. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ..

Evil_Turtle58
Evil_Turtle58Lv15Evil_Turtle58

got to be honest not read much but it's a good read and I kind of love how subzero and scorpion are basically best frienemies kind of like baljeet and Buford from Phineas and Ferb

I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv13I_am_inevitable

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ItIswhatItIs
ItIswhatItIsLv4ItIswhatItIs

You cant exactly call it a sub-zero x danmachi fan-fic. But it is what it is. __________________________________________________________________

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