Review Detail of Legacy_24 in Sub-zero in danmachi

Item: Sub-zero in danmachi
Rating: 2.2

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Legacy_24Lv143yrLegacy_24

Grammar kills the story and it feels really rushed. no character development super short chapters its just not very good imo but the idea was solid

Sub-zero in danmachi

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CodeSpectreLv4CodeSpectre

When's the next chapter of your HP fanfic coming out ??? Or is it dropped ???

3yr

Legacy_24Lv14Legacy_24

Hey thanks for reaching out sorry I havent posted Anything I was afraid the interest wasnt there for the story so I left it be but I have plenty of chapters done Already

CodeSpectre:When's the next chapter of your HP fanfic coming out ??? Or is it dropped ???

3yr

CodeSpectreLv4CodeSpectre

It takes sometime for a fanfic to get popular....Consistent updates will help that !!!

Legacy_24:Hey thanks for reaching out sorry I havent posted Anything I was afraid the interest wasnt there for the story so I left it be but I have plenty of chapters done Already

3yr