yokedjaguar

Has the Author ever had a conversation? With how dog sh it these conversations have been, I'm assuming you've never even spoken to your parents, much less an acquaintance. Sh it was atrocious.

Grammar sucks, ability is too OP for this world, not much else to say. This may or may not be your cup of tea. .

Honestly, it's the English and the conversations that ruin the story. Also, the authors "Genius" character. The biggest problem with genius characters are the authors themselves can't match up. So just ask for something else. That way, you can blame it on character development.

The mc is mentally incapable. It's as simple as that. I don't know if it's the og author or the translator, but the guy is failing at the whole mysterious robot bullshit, not only that. He was allowed to become junnin off rip. Let's not forget Kurenei falling in love with the guy in 2.5 seconds. Don't waste your time. It's dog shite.

Plot holes straight out of chapter 1. Weird encounters. Then boom, he wants to make I-Island, and he has a hero friend who wants to make it happen.Dont forget that there is NO mention of this person until after he has this dream of I-Island Mind you, he's 7... What the actual f u c k is going on?Author get your sh it together, idgf if this is translation or not.

Word skip, it's not a very good translation, and it's not a good read. . .

Honestly, it's the best description I've ever read. Black haired boy with average looks.... Invigorating, I can just picture him now.

5 extra chapters on patreon but has to use a word count. Honestly, it doesn't seem that bad, but I'm not gonna read a lazy novel by a lazy author who's not gonna make it to page 50.

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My biggest trife i have with this novel is the fact I can't stop reading it. Sorry, but 2 chapters a day isn't enough for me. I need at least 30. Maybe more, but I'll cut you some slack, so 30's fine. No, but in all seriousness, this is a wonderful read. It's definitely worth your time. I'd like to see more about his family. I think there's a major plot line that could be made there. He's interacted with 1 sister a couple of times, and his brother is brought up in passing as an incompetent director, but I do believe there could be more. I know you foreshadowed about the eldest brother, so I'm excited for whatever you're planning.