Review Detail of ArtoriaPendragon_ in Sub-zero in danmachi

Really interesting idea but executed terribly and so many cliche’s it’s not even funny If you just kept it being the mc as subzero then it Would be Cool but then you introduced scorpion which is stupid Also there’s the fact that he taught bell cryokinesis which can’t be taught The story is incredibly hard to read and overall just bad I Hope someone who Can actualy speak english and is good at grammer Could Write something similar like maybe a mortal kombat system? Where you can change to the different mortal kombat characters and have there skills,abilities and knowledge? Sounds like a dope idea i have never seen before Anyways overall this fanfic is trash and a waste of time