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Reincarnated with JJK Powerset in Harry Potter!

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My first fanfic and my first story guys! Updates are every week! No patreon or monetary gain from this at all either, this is purely for the reasons to tell a story, so I appreciate the reads! We'll travel to multiple different worlds but rest assured, I'll make sure to flesh them out 100% of the way. Character will start off strong as all hell, and hopefully I'll be able to bring some nuance, and some humanity. Love you everyone! Isekai is a go!

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General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3General_Mahoraga

With this treasure, I summon Eight-handled sword divergent sila divine general mahoraga!......................................................................................

GeeGeeTeeWuu
GeeGeeTeeWuuLv13GeeGeeTeeWuu

nothing bad to say about this story, 10/10

ChrolloLoth
ChrolloLothLv4ChrolloLoth

The writing in this ff is one of the most beautiful things I’ve seen and everything that’s happening mwah chefs kiss now take my stone

Honoured_Writer
Honoured_WriterLv4Honoured_Writer

I‘m actually really enjoying this story so far. It’s plot is interesting as well as its story development at times but one thing that really draws me in is its way with words and how it describes different events. As a author that got into writing to improve my skills Im really taking inspiration from this when it comes to my own works. My only problem with it is it’s almost overwhelming amount of metaphors and descriptions really break the immersion, cause while these descriptions really help to visualise, too much just breaks the stroy flow and gets repetitive. That along with the fact that they’re some moments that can be skipped can be frustratining

THEL0SE4
THEL0SE4Lv4THEL0SE4

i hope you don't drop this , i loved it up until now. My only concern is how the pacing will go.👍

Tiny_Tim_5672
Tiny_Tim_5672Lv14Tiny_Tim_5672

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BigPanda69
BigPanda69Lv2BigPanda69

I hate it :) 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞.............................................. .........

Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

okay I'll admit this is actually a pretty good fic I don't normally do reviews so I'll just say it's worth the read and who he is and who he interacts with he ain't no psycho MC actually got some brains but it's not like super smart and he's also not a psycho so that's a plus

Juwon_Oh
Juwon_OhLv4Juwon_Oh

It's a pretty generic start. The story starts to pick up around chapter 5. The story shines when it comes to the writing quality—definitely top-notch.

OnlyCanRead
OnlyCanReadLv4OnlyCanRead

Great idea and great beginig to be! The first time that I see a sukuna ff, I love the ideas you're trying to incorporate and can't wait for more! Thx.

Danny_567
Danny_567Lv3Danny_567

Author i have read till chapter 10 ,the idea the concept are all good but you are forcing vocabulary on each line of the chapter ,use simple english and at some instances add complex vocabulary it rather goes well and it does not make reading a hassle because when i see your paragraphs and complex vocabulary i just read the crux and move on ,its just not enjoyable ,i mean look at warhammer they too use vocabulary but its not a hassle so maybe just improve your writing style for the readers ,Remember the reader is the one who reads and dont make reading a hassle ,your style of writing is just a info dump remember the story is not about complex vocabulary its about making the readers feel enjoyable.

zahra_kianpour
zahra_kianpourLv3zahra_kianpour

Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️‍🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️‍🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️‍🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️‍🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️‍🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠 Please 🙏🏻 update 🩵🤎💚💜🙏🏻💅🏻❤️‍🔥🩷💛🔥🤍❤️🖤💙🩶💠

Nobleone25
Nobleone25Lv3Nobleone25

This is an excellently written story and the premise is great. but there hasn't been an update in 3 months which is massively painful because Ive never cared about Harry Potter but this story is making me interested

Shishume
ShishumeLv4Shishume

Before i read this, I'm gonna rewatch Harry Potter

Skillite7890
Skillite7890Lv3Skillite7890

The overall is good but I noticed that you are only focusing on friendship of mc with Harry and Hermione its like you making Ron a background character and going in depth in to his character but the story is good 👍

Axel_
Axel_Lv3Axel_

ngl recently i imagine a cross over of JJK and Harry and mc being Geto as in Japan magic school headmaster.Didn't thought I've gonna see this.hmm hope for more updates.

Gilgamesh_The_K1ng
Gilgamesh_The_K1ngLv4Gilgamesh_The_K1ng

Honestly, this is a chef's kiss. Never read such good book like this in ages.

Halua
HaluaLv2Halua

Lets share this piece with others ...........................................d.o.t.s...o.n.l.y................................................................

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