Gh0st00

this the second mistake but it's different than the first one

you messed up your name here and then literally the sentence below it you messed it up again and it's not even the same mistake

think you need to go back and start editing your chapters

it's world enemy not earth enemy

what the hell you mean he came home from work he doesn't work he got all that money from the lotto why the hell would he be working and he's trying to build up his character in all his items and stuff for when he goes to the new world why would he work that makes no sense

and he didn't even have this class when did he pick this up

who's this we so far it's just him unless he has a mouse in his pocket

how many times you going to miss her name up

so we're messing up her name again

I guess once more LOL