With this treasure, I summon Eight-handled sword divergent sila divine general mahoraga!......................................................................................

nothing bad to say about this story, 10/10

The writing in this ff is one of the most beautiful things I’ve seen and everything that’s happening mwah chefs kiss now take my stone

I‘m actually really enjoying this story so far. It’s plot is interesting as well as its story development at times but one thing that really draws me in is its way with words and how it describes different events. As a author that got into writing to improve my skills Im really taking inspiration from this when it comes to my own works. My only problem with it is it’s almost overwhelming amount of metaphors and descriptions really break the immersion, cause while these descriptions really help to visualise, too much just breaks the stroy flow and gets repetitive. That along with the fact that they’re some moments that can be skipped can be frustratining

i hope you don't drop this , i loved it up until now. My only concern is how the pacing will go.👍

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I hate it :) 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞.............................................. .........

okay I'll admit this is actually a pretty good fic I don't normally do reviews so I'll just say it's worth the read and who he is and who he interacts with he ain't no psycho MC actually got some brains but it's not like super smart and he's also not a psycho so that's a plus

It's a pretty generic start. The story starts to pick up around chapter 5. The story shines when it comes to the writing quality—definitely top-notch.

Great idea and great beginig to be! The first time that I see a sukuna ff, I love the ideas you're trying to incorporate and can't wait for more! Thx.