Re: Apocalypse Online

Very interesting and captivating story! Just read the first chapter, and I am already hooked. The author has good writing skills and storytelling skills—definitely one of the more well-written works on the platform. Video game merging with reality is one of my favorite premises, so that's a plus, but apart from the general theme, the author seems to have a few surprises and twists in store. I am excited to see where the story is heading to.

✨Review after 7 chapters✨ ⭐️Writing Quality⭐️ [4 STARS] Well, I never give 5 stars for writing quality since it can't exist unless you do everything perfectly which you can’t as humans make mistakes which is normal but therefore should still be something to strive for. Either way, your Writing Quality is pretty good if nobody nitpicks, so I guess it’s certainly well done 👏 👍 ⭐️Updating Sability⭐️ [5 STARS] You have been updating regularly so far, so I can’t really complain much about it since only something like a break in the case you don’t have time or illness is able to affect updating stability which didn’t happen so far, as long as I didn’t miss anything. Because I am pretty much reading this story the moment you released it so I doubt I am wrong ⭐️Story Development⭐️ [5 STARS] To be honest, the story direction in which it is developing in kinda reminds me of ROTSSG in some similar ways in the same way it reminds me of ZO: SP from the way it all began. Well, the only thing I don’t like is that people with athletic body got advantages over others stat wise (5 stats max bigger than normal). Ofc, that doesn’t mean I complain about it but rather that I was just a little bit annoyed by it which doesn’t surprise me as well though since there is something like a bonus beginner package in limited amounts in the tutorial as a reward which already kinda confirmed that this ain’t a fair game at all the same way it seems to be in the monetary section of selling money in the real world. Anyway, I do like where it is currently heading torwards so don’t regard whatever I wrote above as a complaint as I clearly knew what I was getting into by your introduction of the game. ⭐️Character Design⭐️ [4 STARS] I do like how the MC was designed, at least for now which could change in both positive and negative directions depending on his character development. NOW the sole reason it is 4 stars is because I let some room for myself to judge as I’m pretty sure that there might appear a side-character that annoys me AND in the case that does happen I hope you make it disappear as fast as possible since nobody like annoying characters while the other reason is that everyone got their own views about a good character and a bad one so your character is certainly well done but not 100% for me to give it a 5 stars. ⭐️World Background⭐️ [5 STARS] Usually most Authors do pretty well on this part where you do so too. For the most part I will just say that as long as you don’t do huge info dumbs and introduce it in an interesting/indirect (sometimes direct if needed) way then you are good to go. ⚡️Summary⚡️ Overall I really really like it and I am pretty sure that it will be very popular so I hope you ain’t dropping it or I will find you. Now I do want to warn certain readers that like fair games that this game that he plays is certainly not fair to the overall player base so if you are expecting that, then don’t complain about it if you proceed to read it anyway, ofc there is a reason behind it so it isn’t without reasoning. Besides that this story will be good for sure and I believe you will do your best👀 👍 👏 👻Personal Note👻 Would be cool if you could ping me 🥺😅 Last question: Will the MC be a close fighter? Since he seems to be someone who will fight with his fists if the cover is supposed to say anything? (If this is true, then the ideal weapon besides body armor are GAUNTLETS! Don’t forget that) ✨4,6 Overall Stars✨

I see Villain+r18, 5-star without any thoughts. YOU COULD already tell this novel would be disgustingly good( in a good way of course hehe) if im wrong ill delete this acc after deleting this review

i like the story ....................................................................................................................................

I haven't read the story yet because I wonder if the entire story will take place in the game before it descends into the real world?

I am making this review as of 28 chapters being released. I have been pleasantly surprise at the quality of writing in this novel. The story is progressing fairly quickly at this point, but due to story points, this makes sense. The MC is likeable, though it is clear he has his issues due to his history. The action scenes have been described well and I have been enjoying them. This novel deserves a high rating right now.

The MC is have good character building, the pacing get better after 10 early chapter, i think it will be better if the character and building get explored more.

First MC that is believable as getting a second chance. game world is also nicely developed and feels like a good contrast. I also like how the obstacles don't have simple solutions. pacing feels good and when left at a cliffhanger I am constantly checking for updates! I highly recommend!

Really like the idea of vr game affecting the real world and it’s future. Mc can be a little obnoxious but it’s understandable since he suffered for 10 years and wants to enjoy his life to fullest now that hes got a second chance. My only issue is his powers and the way he obtains them. You would think that he would mainly use his past knowledge to get legendary class, op skills etc. But he got the whole package from single random interaction right in the beginning. Nevertheless I still enjoyed the novel, looking forward to read more.

After 160 ch., i must say, i’ts quite an enjoyable read. Great story, great world building, great grammar, good action, albeit a little short but well written. I hope Author planned way ahead because after 160 ch., only a little more than a month went by in story time and seeing that the online game will take a year and then hopefully some arcs in the real world as well, i‘d say we‘re looking for 1000-2000 chapters to see the story completely unfold. Let‘s hope for the best!

Gave 5 star review just for #Harem and #Villain Tag...hopefully the Author stay true to the "tag" Though havent read it but hopefully its not beta, simp, or mentally unstable mc....

very good but the updating is way to slow

Love this book so far! Dying for new chapters!

8/7/2023 Good writting quality. Only a few missing words and or misspelling. Great pacing. Author does not waste his and our time with small side quests and has us enjoying just about every chapter. Unexpectedly good!!! I read the free chapters and stopped there until I can get more fast passes. The chapters seem to be 1 per so I can eventually get them. I am unsure about update speed though.

Great novel mc is dark/anti-hero type.The plot is very intresting and writing quality is great.I recommend this novel though I have only read around the first 30 chapters(this novel is still new).MC character design is good in my opinion .

Awesome work, finally a smart mc with adaptability 🤩

After reading the reviews i have high expectations for the Novel. Hope i wont get disappointed [img=recommend]

a very good and unique novel I'm really enjoying it

A villain!That's interesting. I really like this novel. I'll learn more from this novel.