✨Review after 7 chapters✨ ⭐️Writing Quality⭐️ [4 STARS] Well, I never give 5 stars for writing quality since it can't exist unless you do everything perfectly which you can’t as humans make mistakes which is normal but therefore should still be something to strive for. Either way, your Writing Quality is pretty good if nobody nitpicks, so I guess it’s certainly well done 👏 👍 ⭐️Updating Sability⭐️ [5 STARS] You have been updating regularly so far, so I can’t really complain much about it since only something like a break in the case you don’t have time or illness is able to affect updating stability which didn’t happen so far, as long as I didn’t miss anything. Because I am pretty much reading this story the moment you released it so I doubt I am wrong ⭐️Story Development⭐️ [5 STARS] To be honest, the story direction in which it is developing in kinda reminds me of ROTSSG in some similar ways in the same way it reminds me of ZO: SP from the way it all began. Well, the only thing I don’t like is that people with athletic body got advantages over others stat wise (5 stats max bigger than normal). Ofc, that doesn’t mean I complain about it but rather that I was just a little bit annoyed by it which doesn’t surprise me as well though since there is something like a bonus beginner package in limited amounts in the tutorial as a reward which already kinda confirmed that this ain’t a fair game at all the same way it seems to be in the monetary section of selling money in the real world. Anyway, I do like where it is currently heading torwards so don’t regard whatever I wrote above as a complaint as I clearly knew what I was getting into by your introduction of the game. ⭐️Character Design⭐️ [4 STARS] I do like how the MC was designed, at least for now which could change in both positive and negative directions depending on his character development. NOW the sole reason it is 4 stars is because I let some room for myself to judge as I’m pretty sure that there might appear a side-character that annoys me AND in the case that does happen I hope you make it disappear as fast as possible since nobody like annoying characters while the other reason is that everyone got their own views about a good character and a bad one so your character is certainly well done but not 100% for me to give it a 5 stars. ⭐️World Background⭐️ [5 STARS] Usually most Authors do pretty well on this part where you do so too. For the most part I will just say that as long as you don’t do huge info dumbs and introduce it in an interesting/indirect (sometimes direct if needed) way then you are good to go. ⚡️Summary⚡️ Overall I really really like it and I am pretty sure that it will be very popular so I hope you ain’t dropping it or I will find you. Now I do want to warn certain readers that like fair games that this game that he plays is certainly not fair to the overall player base so if you are expecting that, then don’t complain about it if you proceed to read it anyway, ofc there is a reason behind it so it isn’t without reasoning. Besides that this story will be good for sure and I believe you will do your best👀 👍 👏 👻Personal Note👻 Would be cool if you could ping me 🥺😅 Last question: Will the MC be a close fighter? Since he seems to be someone who will fight with his fists if the cover is supposed to say anything? (If this is true, then the ideal weapon besides body armor are GAUNTLETS! Don’t forget that) ✨4,6 Overall Stars✨
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LIKEI think I am one of the first readers considering that there are only 17 collections currently (I think I joined around 1-9 approximately 🤔)
Thank you so much for the encouragement!
Np, I meant "pin and highlight"* btw and not ping 😂😅
Added it to library, I’ll wait until there’s more chapters to read and review, I hope it goes well for you Author.
Thanks!
