OVERLORD OF MARVEL(OMNIVERSE)

the writing is really messy and english is also really bad but not unreadable... Its very vauge and I feel like I am reading a summary instead of a story... But the Author manage to keep me intrested and also make me give him five....Everything it lacked made up for its intresting characters and scenarios.... Good luck and I hope you find yourself an Editor so this can get 100 times better... Love the book please don't drop...

Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc.

Reveal spoiler

If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems

The fillers are not needed. The grammar needs massive help. The pace of the story needs help. The story itself needs help. The +18 scenes needs help The author needs help. The Mc needs help.

so much info dump and useless word , .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .

Dunno. I liked the first chapter. The following 12 were a huge mess though. I also feel like the average 7th grader could use better English (im not from an English speaking country). Overall i think this is only a good read for: - someone realy realy realy desperate for Overlord content - someone who's English is absolutly terroble to the point that it doesn't bother him much and is willing to deal with 12 Chapters of 2 parapgraph new character introductions and similar info dumb

The grammar gave me aids.

Plot is straight forward, but the writing quality if hands down horrendous. I've read up till chap 25 and I can't keep on reading anymore as the grammar is non-existent, and the "my dears" in every sentence the MC says that it becomes sickening. In addition to this, the plot does not really have much going on for it. It is a good idea - overlord x marvel, but they guy is literally moving on from A - B with nothing really going on. It's just a OP dude who is getting a Harem. Although I said all this, don't let it stop you from reading this FF, that is if u can handle the grammatical errors.

The concept is good, but the grammar almost kill my one and only brain cell. This whole novel is a total grammar mess. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The story has good concept and I find if pretty interesting, but I've dropped it because of the writing quality. The writing quality is a true Trash.

Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Must Read !! This Story Has A Good Plot + A Good Character Development 👏 And Great Fan Services Too Hats off to The AUTHOR !! GREAT WORK 🙂👍🎉

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I don't know if it gets better after chapter 12, but I didn't like it, there's a lot of information................................... ......................

Los rellenos no son necesarios. La gramática necesita ayuda masiva. El ritmo de la historia necesita ayuda. La historia en sí necesita ayuda. Las escenas +18 necesitan ayuda El autor necesita ayuda. El Mc necesita ayuda.

Muito bom espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Muito bom historia muito bem feita e explicativa espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhosa parabéns 👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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just saw you previous comment as Zeus in dc, since this is an overlord fanfic we will see how you develop the story I might change my review if the story gets worse of good it depends on what you do