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WalterHeisenberg
WalterHeisenbergLv42yr
2022-02-17 21:56

The fillers are not needed. The grammar needs massive help. The pace of the story needs help. The story itself needs help. The +18 scenes needs help The author needs help. The Mc needs help.

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Hamster_cultivator
Hamster_cultivatorLv15

Very much agreed upon and filler/info dump till chapter 13. Chapter are like animepedia (wiki with a twist) and even when you pass that, grammar is like trying to translate litteraly chinese/Korean with Google so in the end you loose every meaning or logical sentences to explain or make Mc and mob talk. So... Unless chapters are heavily edited I don't recommend reading it otherwise you may loose your mind on what's happening and what characters are saying.

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