WeepingCarp

She doesn’t die wtf

Change the name of the country and the kingdom🙏

Amazing.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

please chnage the name of the country and the kingdome 🙏

Hugely disappointed, those names were horrible. Like, it breaks the immersion. I hope you change em so bad. I can’t take em seriously, I was waiting for them to finally name the kingdoms and the county. Black dragon is cool name and all but it’s so stereotypical for the mc to name something they have a name like thats so I’d consider it a bad name for a country since it takes away any uniqueness from the country. Plus it sounds like a 12 year old named it. And Washington is just plain bad for a fantasy kingdome name. A name for those kind of thing should be unique, like I remember the main city in overlord anime because of its uncommon and unique name, E-Rantel. I don’t what you were going with this, if you were trying to appeal to the Americans or something. You were on a roll of banger chapters, love your novel but this…

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