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One Piece: Makoto

A man dies and is reborn as Luffy's brother

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#2 Off To Sea

#2 Off to Sea

'So that's my dad, is that why Garp was taking care of Luffy in the show?' Makoto thought to himself.

17 years later.

"Ha I got done eating before you which means I'll be going off to sea before you!" Said Luffy who was now 17

Luffy was eating super fast so that's why he got done first. But Makoto was eating like a normal person. Makoto had brown hair and black eyes, He had a black long sleeve shirt on and some black pants, and he was taller than Luffy.

Luffy - 5'7

Makoto - 5'9

"Come on Luffy your getting a big head"

Makino then walked up to them with some packed food

"What are you guys rumbling on about?"

"Makoto thinks he'll become the pirate king, but that can't happen because I'm going to become the pirate king!"

"... Well how about you guys race to see who'll become the king of the pirates first, that way you'll stay motivated"

"Wait I've never thought about that" Luffy and Makoto said at the same time

"Let's shake on it"

"Wait we got to make some rules, first rule we can't help each other unless we are in real danger, although with my Gum Gum fruit I don't think I need help, Now your turn come up with a rule."

"Hmm No more rules, we only have one rule and that's the one you said so let's shake on it"

They then shook hands.

--10 minutes later--

Everyone that came to know and love Luffy and Makoto were at the docks watching Makoto and Luffy sail away in a little boat.

"Stay safe you guys!"

"Don't get into too much trouble!"

"Become good pirates!"

"I can't wait to see your face in the papers!"

But out of nowhere a sea looking monster raised his head above the water. It was a large sea king. It was brown and had red eyes. I

"It's you again, long time no see!"

Yelled Luffy as he yelled out "GUM GUM PISTOL" He made a fist and threw a punch, his arm extended punching the Sea King in the face and knocking it back into the water.

Luffy then turned his body to the direction Makoto was going (There going separate ways Luffy right Makoto Left) "I told you I was super strong, But I bet you could also do that, couldn't you?!"

"You know it, Luffy!"

"Well Makoto the next time we meet I might be the King of the Pirates!"

"I'm sorry to say Luffy but that is indeed false!"

"Okay we will see!"

Said Luffy as he sat down and immediately started eating all his food, Makoto also sat down, at this point they were too far away to see each other.

'So system, who will become the pirate king, me or Luffy?'

//It will indeed be Luffy//

'And why is that'

//Are you sure you want to go farther into the future I know and see everything, but don't you want it to be a surprise?//

'Okay just tell me why and I'll save the rest for the future'

//Well if you wish I'll tell you, You will find the One Piece but give it to Luffy. At first he throws a fit, but after he has no other choice other than to accept the title.//

'I guess that makes sense, anyways System open'

A blue window opened up in front of Makoto's face, a screen that only he could see.

Status

[Name - Monkey D. Makoto]

[Age - 17]

[Gender - Male]

[Strength - Is around Don Krieg]

[Devil Fruit - special paramecia Aoi Aoi No MI - Allows user to produce blue flames, when awakened can be even hotter than the sun]

[Haki - Armament - Unawakened - Observation - Awakened - Conquers - Unawakened]

Stats 5x boost

Strength 120/999,999,999

Speed/Stamina 200/999,999,999

HP 3500/999,999,999

Endurance 3500/999,999,999

Intelligence 140/1000

Shop -

Tori Tori No Mi - Out of Stock (When owner dies it will be here)

Nagi Nagi No MI - (When owner dies it will be here)

Hie Hie No MI - (When owner dies it will be here)

Horu Horu No Mi - (When owner dies it will be here)

Doku Doku No Mi - (When owner dies it will be here)

Mane Mane No Mi - (When owner dies it will be here)

Pika Pika No Mi - (When owner dies it will be here)

MORE?

Makoto then closed the window

//You still haven't told me why you haven't chosen to master Haki, you could easily do it.//

'Shouldn't you know?'

//I wish I did but for some reason when It comes to you I can't look into your mind.//

'FIne I'll tell you, I'm not awakening Haki because I'll beat people way too quick, I'll unlock it after the war or when I go to the GrandLine.'

//And that is why you have barely been training, if you would have trained for those 17 years you would've been at Yonko level strength. Wait no. If you would've trained for about a year or 2 you would've been at Yonko level strength."

'Yeah and that's boring I wanna work my way up to the top, I might use my cheats here and there but that's when I know I'm going to fight really strong people'

//Well I guess you can do whatever you want//

'Well how long until we get to an island?'

//In one hour, so you should get some sleep//

'Is that your way of telling me that something is going to go down on the island?'

//I don't know maybe could be or it couldn't//

'Well before I get some rest I'll eat some food, I'm kinda hungry'

//Suit yourself I'm not your mother//

'Looks like you need some sleep yourself, you're being cranky.'

//Whatever//

Makoto then got some food out of the barrel he brought with him, he then unboxed the food and started to eat it. After a while he was done.

'Okay goodnight system'

//It's not night but have a good rest//

Makoto then went to sleep very quickly like not even a second after

TO BE CONTINUED

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