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North Of Lies

Auteur: zowji
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What is North Of Lies

Lisez le roman North Of Lies écrit par l'auteur zowji publié sur WebNovel. "North Of Lies" is the tale of the fall and betrayal of a once-mighty Deity who ruled the Celestial Heavens itself. Cast out and sealed under a mountain, this powerful being faced eternal imprisonment...

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"North Of Lies" is the tale of the fall and betrayal of a once-mighty Deity who ruled the Celestial Heavens itself. Cast out and sealed under a mountain, this powerful being faced eternal imprisonment. However, before things could escalate, his soul was forcefully ejected from his divine body. He was then reborn as Jin, an ordinary boy stripped of all memories of his divine origins...

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zowji
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Hello guys, The Author of this novel here! Just wanted to let you guys know I can take criticism and use it to make my novel better than what it was before. Also please point out any issues or concerns you have with this novel as well. Enjoy reading!

melcanread
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CADMUS
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This novel deserves more recognition. The author's writing style is 🤌🏻✨️ It's very poetic which makes the story engrossing to read. There were a few errors here and there but they're only minor and can be easily fixed with a bit of proofreading. The action scenes were good but not quite there yet. I didn't feel thrilled while reading the fight scenes...or maybe that's just me 🤷🏻‍♂️ Also, there's a lack of description for other supporting characters. Plotwise, it's quite good. The prologue got me specifically intrigued. Keep it up author 👏🏻

jaymanifesto
jaymanifestoLv3jaymanifesto

Read a few chapters and overall, for your first story (?), it’s not bad at all. I really like your writing style, choice of wording, and judging from your sentence structures and grammar, your story has true potential to evolve. However, I found it quite hard to catch up with the story’s progression. Maybe it’s because there are a lot of metaphors….even in the summary/synopsis. Personally, as a reader, I prefer to know what exactly is happening in the story and usually avoid stories that beat around the bush. However, these are just my personal thoughts. Firstly, I guess I can say that the summary needs fixing, try making it more straightforward so that readers would know what the story is about…much faster. You are free, though, to render your story however you like! Once again, I wish you luck in your writing process and have fun!

siimonns
siimonnsLv1siimonns

In relation to this being the author's first story, its quite good. There is a fundamental understanding of world building and character development seen within the story and alot of effort has been put into the story. My review is being done on the basis of reading the first 2 chapters and the introduction of chapter 3. Personally, I believe that the first chapter doesn't do well in establishing the story, to me it doesn't transition well from the first to second chapter (ch) and rather than labelling it as the first ch it would be more beneficial to have it be labelled as a prologue as it would convey to the readers that the ch is more of a separate introductory, independant from the beginning of the story as by labelling it as the first ch it may confuse the audience when going from 1st to 2nd. In addition it may be better to actually have the 2nd ch be the 1st ch instead. Another problem I had was the change from 1st to 3rd person writing, it feels unnatural to switch from a character perspective to a outside perspective, although it does make sense for ch 1 and 2, the change from 3rd to 1st person writing from the 2nd to 3rd ch feels out of place. Despite my critiques, I still think that this story does have some potential and while it may not be a hit, it is still quite the good story for a first time author and im excited to see what comes next.

Stephen_Sumilang
Stephen_SumilangLv1Stephen_Sumilang

W novel, W writing, W art. Only bad part is L author. [img=faceslap]. Could also do more with showing and less telling, and some parts are a bit too cliche, such as the line "with great power comes great responsibility. Idk about that one chief

madddoux
madddouxLv1madddoux

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR! The concepts and character development so far has so much potential. I trust that you will make the correct choices in your writing. I am excited to see how the story progresses. Keep it up !

obiparadise_purity
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I love the development of the novel, and your writing skills. Everything is in place and it's interesting. I hope Jin would be able to do great things I believe that too. Nice job author.

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LordShivaStories
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First of all, this story is very good not going to lie, I like the descriptive writing since it makes the reader get an image transmit in his mind, and it feels like I am in there. Interesting plot, not saying that this betrayed god hasn't been portrayed before in modern, but I am just saying that your way of portraying this is unique, and it has kind of different take. Now we mix these two things we kind of get a full-blown masterpiece with enormous potentiality and third of all the pacing doesn't feel rushed. Hope to see more author

NewbieJimjim
NewbieJimjimLv3NewbieJimjim

Honestly, I find the plot of the story quite intriguing, and the writing quality is impressive. However, I must admit that the prologue didn't captivate my interest. This is just my opinion , the narrative style in the prologue doesn't align with my personal taste, making it somewhat difficult for me to read. Nonetheless, everything else in the story is excellent and well done. Keep up the good work!

Lo_rezi00
Lo_rezi00Lv2Lo_rezi00

to be honest this book is lovely.I was captivated by the first chapter and can't wait to read morekeep the flags flying author ❣️

Kkomi
KkomiLv11Kkomi

Your writing style is awesome! it flows so well, i just couldn't stop reading! Love Jin ~! can't wait to read more! An enjoyable page-turner that is highly recommended for all <3

Tifala
TifalaLv1Tifala

A good novel that grabs you from the first chapter. The descriptions of the world and the experiences of the characters are well felt. There are philosophical reflections at some points, the text, where the description of the task or magic is well highlighted, does not merge with the rest of the novel. You can see how the author is perfecting his writing of this story.

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OldNispy
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I've read the first few chaps and this really has potential! The characters are there. There is also the budding world building. Nice job man!

eudine
eudineLv13eudine

This is a nice read so far! The characters are nicely fleshed out and written, and I love how the story is progressing so far! I don’t have much to critique or say, though, kudos to you have to author!

shreya_ki
shreya_kiLv3shreya_ki

Really loved your writing skills.the character and background is so well written really appreciate your hard work. Keep it up author.

Slayer0
Slayer0Lv3Slayer0

The way you write is really engaging, I can imagine everything clearly like it was happening before my eyes, keeps me turning the pages. And the development of the story is quite good.

Foudhaili_Idris
Foudhaili_IdrisLv1Foudhaili_Idris

Just finished reading the first three chapter and... Not bad! I am already captivated by Jin's determination to keep moving forward despite his difficult circumstances. I am eager to see how he will progress and influence the story for sure. Keep it up ^^

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