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Naruto: Root Ninja

A young man is killed at the age of 20 and is reincarnated into the world of Naruto. But unlike other reincarnators, he didn't meet anyone, nor did he get any wishes or powers. He wakes up in the body of a 3 year old kid. He looks around and finds a man with bandages covering one side. He said to the three year old kid "From now on, you are Hakuto. Meet Kaze, he will be your brother from now on and the Root foundation, your home." For the first time after writing 4 books, I have decided to go for NO HAREM!!! I am going to try something new and the whole fan-fic is going to be in MC's POV. I know that I am bad at POV and that's why I would like to get some advices after you read a few chapters so that I can improve them in the future Although I plan on making the MC go from weak to strong, I still don't know the power balance and that's what happened in the last fan-fics. I sometimes end up giving him some power that makes him way stronger than others. I did say I wasn't going to write anymore, but I decided to write anyways. For those who already read something I wrote, would know that till date, I haven't completed even a single story. I am. not going to promise that I would finish this, but I will try to finish it. I don't own the cover and got this from an episode. I also don't own anything other than my OC characters.

komega · Anime et bandes dessinées
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I noticed that there hasn't been that much response for chapters as before. I would love to know if there is something that is making the story boring?

If you tell me where I am lacking, I can improve. But, if the whole story itself is boring, I don't know what to do.

And also, I noticed that the story has deviated from the title, so I was planning to go for a timeskip and slowly add these incidents as a flashback incidents in the story. What do you guys think about this?

So, that's it. Tell me your thoughts on this. I might mostly be free the whole day tomorrow. So, based on your response, I can write the chapters. As for the swords which many didn't like, I can't think of any other weapon that can suit the root ninja life.