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Marvel: Meditation System

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Transmigrated as Grant Ward in prison. Follow as Grant Ward causes chaos in the MCU I own nothing except my OC. [dis cord.gg/6YYvm6tj6t] [pat reon.com/alcoholic_panda ]

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Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :SHIELD
Volume 2 :Kamar-Taj
Volume 3 :Training & Hunt
Volume 4 :Asgard & Dormammu
Volume 5 :Final Volume

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Masterofall1
Masterofall1Lv14

The other elements of the story just bend to the main character's plans, there has been no real challenge for the main character no real challenge or no real conflict when everything is 'planned out' by the main character and goes exactly how the main character plans. Examples; 1. The ancient one, even if she couldn't see the main character's future, would still be wary of the main character for being a god's puppet, and she would at the very least demand that he does not harm the Earth, and even then it's a major stretch that she would teach him magic, she would most likely see him as a threat to the earth and eliminate him then and there, just for being connected to a 'patron god'. 2. The whole entire scenario with the black widow is just one whole pile of plot convenience BS, first off SHIELD didn't recruit black widow at all in fact they were hunting her and trying to kill her, and while yes it's entirely possible for SHIELD to try and brainwash her or use her trauma to manipulate her, it's harder because she can know the signs of brainwashing from the red room, and even then the delivery for such a plot development could have gone over a lot better if implemented at a slower pace, not just 'Oh, by the way, I noticed you're still brainwashed, yeah let me just get rid of that brainwashing and then add my own brainwashing to make you 'fall' for me. Now let's mention the main character design, honestly everything the main character does is defined as the typical manipulative, power-hungry fool, that everything just falls into his lap. Honestly, it's probably better if this was a cultivation novel at this point, it's that bad. At least with a cultivation novel, you can use the excuse of 'oh the heavens are smiling upon me' or 'I've been blessed by the heavens'.

ydoBoN
ydoBoNLv1

The story began great, The first 2 "arcs" did fine. When he was imprison and the magic learning arc were by far my favorites. But as soon as we began the avengers arc all went down hill fast. The change in quality and content was so abrupt and grant that it felt like a completely different fic. The character interaction were kinda awful, everyone acted completely out of character (even the MC), the plot took a hard decline with cheap story progression (The mission thing with Widow is something I expect from a comedy/crack fic) the explanation behind this event was somehow worse. The power levels and types were good thought, I enjoy your creativity with Nen and it's conjugation, I also applaud you for giving your character logical weaknesses. Loved the balance, nevertheless my enjoyment of the story kinda died after the magic training, you kept saying that you are going to rewrite the story so you didn't have to fix it right away and I belive this tax your story quite a bit. In my opinion you should have worked a bit more on the overall direction and structure of the story even if it meant a slower pace. Also if you have any sort of negative feeling towards a faction (shield) you have to work around it, instead of just making a "bashing" paragraph every chapter. You made shield too evil and stupidly clumpsy to be believable. You want to destroy it or kill everyone in it, that's fine, but don't try to justify it by making every decision they took cartoonishly evil. (Fury and Colson are supposed to be charismatic and smart, your take on them was everything but)

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