1.personally i dont like natasha as (candidate) heroine, 2. i dont like a jerk system (give prank, etc) 3. punishment part make it like a slave system ..........,...................................................,...................................................,........................................

It was fine until the ''selling'' of the meditation system. Medidation is completelty worthless as of chapter 14 and It never will be useful for point gathering ever. He gets about 50points max in a week if I remember correctly. He sold a jet for 10k points. He can sell corpses for 5 points.Corpses of extra grunts. So he has more a way efficient way to gain points. Why is it even called meditation system at this point? He doesn't need to meditate. He is in new york with his superhuman abilities. Zetsu+master spy+stealth so he can just do some robberies or become a murderhobo and gain points way way way way easier. It has no meaning. Killed the passion I had for this. Hate it when author do that and title of the book becomes a scam.

Incredibly well paced fic with an interesting premise and an actually cunning protagonist instead of just another Aizen wannabe. Update rate has been stable till now and I have reason to believe that it'll be the case in the future but the fact that sells it to me is that the power is not just handed to the MC on a silver platter instead, he has to grind for it. So, a pretty interesting read in my opinion.

The writing quality is not great but it is readable... The stability of updates is fine so I rated that pretty high... The Story Development is neither good nor bad to be honest... if you are someone looking for a wild time with wild theories and huge spirals of just random ideas, then the story development is for you... I rated the story development low because there is no reason or rhyme to his choices.... and even if there is, the mc doesn't explain it properly anyway... The Character Design leaves a lot wanting because the author leaves a lot of gaps for us to fill in... he doesn't tell us how Ward feels, he makes us figure it out and that makes no sense to me... As for the background... a badly described marvel background... when writing fanfics, I judge a background by what you add to it besides the cannon, and this adds nothing... I believe it takes away if anything. #JustBeingHonest

The other elements of the story just bend to the main character's plans, there has been no real challenge for the main character no real challenge or no real conflict when everything is 'planned out' by the main character and goes exactly how the main character plans. Examples; 1. The ancient one, even if she couldn't see the main character's future, would still be wary of the main character for being a god's puppet, and she would at the very least demand that he does not harm the Earth, and even then it's a major stretch that she would teach him magic, she would most likely see him as a threat to the earth and eliminate him then and there, just for being connected to a 'patron god'. 2. The whole entire scenario with the black widow is just one whole pile of plot convenience BS, first off SHIELD didn't recruit black widow at all in fact they were hunting her and trying to kill her, and while yes it's entirely possible for SHIELD to try and brainwash her or use her trauma to manipulate her, it's harder because she can know the signs of brainwashing from the red room, and even then the delivery for such a plot development could have gone over a lot better if implemented at a slower pace, not just 'Oh, by the way, I noticed you're still brainwashed, yeah let me just get rid of that brainwashing and then add my own brainwashing to make you 'fall' for me. Now let's mention the main character design, honestly everything the main character does is defined as the typical manipulative, power-hungry fool, that everything just falls into his lap. Honestly, it's probably better if this was a cultivation novel at this point, it's that bad. At least with a cultivation novel, you can use the excuse of 'oh the heavens are smiling upon me' or 'I've been blessed by the heavens'.

It started out very good, but the quality kept dropping. Now I can't read it anymore. The gods keep messing however they want.. The author keeps finding ways to nerf the mc complaining about how he is getting too op which is completely ridiculous since you are the one who made him like that to start with. This story is a very accurate example of how stories get ruined without proper pre-planning.

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Hopefully he goes on to open a company or provate force for himself in the bear future, im liking how your taking wards charecter, he can be someone who is neutral until provoked. Thanks for the story

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