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Login Before Others: Stone Age

Auteur: Let Me Handle It
Bandes dessinées et romans graphiques
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# VR # MMORPG #LOGINBEFOREHAND # STONEAGE Human Origin: Tribe was a virtual reality MMORPG. The player would start from the stone age, build tribes, and slowly develop their culture. It had attracted countless players of all ages on the day the game was launched and it quickly became the most popular game ever. However, no one knew that the game was actually created by aliens using a high-dimension technology called the Knowledge Child. Just a year after the game was launched, it started to devour reality. Chen Ran was a high-level player and was regressed back to the day before the launch. He was able to enter the game earlier than others. [SSS-grade Unit: Stainless Giant.] [Effect: Build 10000x faster and gives all the buildings a 10000x boost.] [SSS-grade Land: Elf’s Forest.] [Effect: Farming speed and production rate increased by 10000x.] [SSS-grade Wonder: Light of Civilization.] [Effect: 10000x increase for the land to philosophers, literateurs, scientists and other professionals that would lead the growth of a civilization.] He took all of those things before others could even learn of them. A year later, the game was finally officially launched. When the players logged into the game, they were dumbfounded by what they saw. “Are you sure this is the stone age?” Another year later, the aliens were about to invade Earth, thinking that the human civilization had collapsed. However, Chen Ran stood on top of one of the 10 thousand Star Destroyer Canon and yelled, “Don’t look down on us humans!”

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First of all, the potential of the story is not that great. This kind of plot has already been used a lot of times, but sometimes an overused plot can still be good if added with enough spice to make the story interesting, or if the spices are different, the story might be somewhat or entirely unique to its predecessors. Second, the progression of the story is too rushed, or I might say that the author is lazy enough to make a lore or a plot for the novel. Then there's the world background, and I might say that the world background of this novel is below average. Why? Because the story is too rushed, there are a lot of things in the story that aren't explained thoroughly enough for the readers to understand, and there's a sudden drop of new information with no proper background or history for the thing to stand on its own and justify the author's decision to create it in the first place. Third, the writing quality itself is somewhat average or slightly above average because the author didn't put enough love and effort into writing this novel, and loving your work is an important characteristic of a good novel. If you just write a novel as a product, the reader must also feel that. Lastly, the updating stability is good, but quality must come before quantity. In conclusion, the only downsides to this novel are the too fast story progression, the lack of effort put into putting lore in the story, and the fact that the story is not unique enough to satisfy veteran readers who have already read a ton of novels.

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