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White Online

Auteur: Alekzi
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Synopsis

[WPC #246 - Silver Place Winner!] Since he was a child, Isaac was unable to improve his strength no matter how much he tried, like he was cursed by the Gods. One day, a massive snowstorm struck the peaceful city of Snowstar, wreaking havoc in a peaceful community. Young Isaac was wandering alone in the forest when the snowstorm struck, seeking adventures and excitement, but instead, he found something else that completely changed him and his future. Several years later, Isaac suffered an incident caused by his jealous classmates, which bedridden him for several months, but after the traumatizing experience, doctors thought that it would take him years before he could overcome his trauma, but against all odds... He overcame it in 2 weeks! Being heavily sheltered and protected by his family after the incident, Isaac's life seemed dull and kind of boring, but then... The highly anticipated VRMMORPG White Online was released. Without thinking twice, Isaac bought the cheapest VR Helmet available and entered the new world with almost zero expectations, but excited nonetheless. This is the story of Isaac Whitelock, who will rise from being a protected and weak individual to being one of the sole hopes of the entire Human race. [Connecting...] [Welcome to White Online!] [Legacies awaits you!] [Do you want to be a Legacy Carrier or Casual Player who history won't remember?] __________________ Disclaimer: Cover owned by me, made by Dini Marlina __________________ https://www.patreon.com/aesirproductions Me, alongside my friends, decided to create a novel. Please, check it out, and support if you enjoy it. I can promise, it's going to be a wild ride. ___________________ Tags: Action - Romance - Adventure - Video Games - Slice of Life - No Harem - R-18 - Yandere - VRMMORPG - Martial Arts - Comedy - Genius Protagonist - Beautiful Male Lead - Worshipped MC - Mysterious Past - Heartwarming - Cute Female Lead - Clingy Lover - Weak to Strong - Gods - Loved MC - Calm Protagonist - Rich Protagonist - Legacies - Historical - Famous Protagonist

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Chapter 1White Online.

''The world's most highly anticipated VRMMORPG, White Online, is going on sale tomorrow!'' A middle-aged female News Anchor said with an eager face.

The middle-aged man next to her smiled and continued, ''White Online, a game that has been teased for over 10 long years, is finally opening its servers! The world will, without a doubt, enter a new era of VR games!''

The female News Anchor nodded excitedly, ''White Online got its name from the beautiful snowy landscapes that will be the main trait of the game! The game's developers from Legacy Company have revealed that the world's first AI was added to the game! There have also been rumors about the NPCs shown in the trailers. Some believe that they are actually New Gen Humans! That has not been proven, but after the decision to incorporate the AI, the rumors have once again resurfaced!''

The middle-aged man took over, ''Tomorrow at 12 AM, the servers will officially open! It will definitely be a busy day at Legacy Company with the rumors that over 300 million VR Helmets have been sold!''

''White Online! The World of Legacies will be the start of a new era!''

...

Meanwhile, in the city of Snowstar...

Snow covered the beautifully designed architecture, covering the city in a sheet of white.

Captivating and mesmerizing.

Lofty skyscrapers soared toward the sky, breaking up the monotonous pattern of white, their lights reflecting in the distance.

The citizens walking in the streets looked satisfied, going on with their lives as usual, but most of them had their heads toward the screens plastered on the sides of the buildings.

The News was shown on each and every screen; passersby stopped walking and gazed at the News with enthusiastic faces.

In front of one of the screens...

A young man, whose hair matched the snowy environment around him, gazed longingly at one of these screens. He had stunning facial features! You could almost mistake him for a girl with his delicate-looking eyebrows and smooth-looking skin. It didn't help that his skin was more flawless than any of the females around him.

This fact didn't go unnoticed, earning the ire of those standing around him.

He got a lot of attention from the nearby crowd, but that young man's concentration was on the screen.

This young man's name was Isaac Whitelock.

He was 18 years old and should be in school at this time, but he'd dropped out for unknown reasons.

Snow began slowly falling from the sky, which woke Isaac from his stupor.

He started walking in the streets, his every step crunching loudly in the snow.

Isaac walked a few hundred meters, finally coming to a stop; he turned his head and saw a radiant sign [VR Helmets 34% Off!]

It was coming from one of the many stores, which was very busy currently— excited teens and adults left the store with small boxes in their hands. A picture of a VR Helmet on the side of each box.

''White Online... Well, I have nothing else to do... Might as well say goodbye to my allowance,'' Isaac wryly smiled as he entered the store.

The area where VR Helmets were sold was bustling— it was almost the only place with customers.

Isaac didn't try to take the VR Helmet forcefully— he waited until there were fewer people and grabbed one of the VR Helmets with a tag [299$ - 34%]

He purchased the VR Helmet and quickly exited the busy store— he'd gotten his allowance yesterday, and the first thing he bought was an expensive item that almost bottomed his wallet.

But Isaac didn't seem distressed— instead, he was curious about the new world he was about to enter.

He left the hustle and bustle of the nearby shops and started walking toward his home.

It took him nearly thirty minutes to arrive in his neighborhood, but he didn't seem to be exhausted, even slightly. His body didn't look athletic. It was actually quite delicate and could easily ignite an elderly woman's protective instincts.

Two guards stood in front of the gates, blocking his path.

''ID.'' One of the guards said with an apathetic face, acting as if he didn't know who the young man was. Even so, the man's countenance couldn't hide the visible anger in his eyes.

Isaac sighed, 'Don't act like you don't know me, you dickhead.'

He grabbed his wallet and showed his ID.

The guard snorted and opened the gate very slowly.

But Isaac waited patiently until the gate was fully opened, and he managed to enter.

It only took three whole minutes...

Isaac entered the neighborhood, ignoring the guard's laughter as he walked through the gates.

The neighborhood was stunning! All of the houses looked like small mansions, with massive yards and their own fences and gates.

The cars driving in the neighborhood were the most expensive one could find in the market currently, but it was an ordinary sight to Isaac.

He walked for another 10 minutes until he reached a particular mansion, which didn't look any less extravagant compared to the others.

The mansion was enormous, with over 5 floors and a large back and front yard.

There was a tall fence surrounding the mansion with a beautiful metal gate placed in the center.

Isaac walked up to the gate and looked to his left, where a small, indiscriminate camera was located.

He simply waved his hand.

Instantly, the gates were opened, and Isaac entered the beautiful yard. Pure white snow covered the ground, and beautiful statues stood tall, dotted across the landscape.

Bushes surrounded the yard like a garden, but they were covered in snow. It gave an otherwordly kind of beauty to the yard.

Isaac opened the front door and entered the mansion.

The interior was just as beautiful as you could imagine.

The floors and the walls were a handsome light brown, crafted from the wood of an Oak Tree.

The furniture looked brand new, and paintings covered the walls.

There was a simple stairway to the second-floor dozen meters away from the entry. A spacious room with a plain table in its center was directly in front of Isaac.

On the right side of the first floor was a massive kitchen, and off to the left were the living and dining room.

Isaac took his jacket off and placed it on the hanger— he put his shoes gently on the shoe rack and carefully ascended toward the second floor.

However, before he managed to close the gap, a voice interrupted him.

''Isaac? Where have you been?'' An attractive, black-haired, middle-aged woman peeked from the kitchen and asked.

Isaac turned his head and smiled awkwardly, ''Mom, I just went for a walk.''

His mother, Isabella, was worried, ''You shouldn't have— it is not safe for you!"

Isaac sighed, ''Sorry, mom.''

Isabella approached Isaac and was about to hug him until she saw that he was carrying something.

''What is this?'' She asked.

Isaac saw her looking at the VR Helmet box— he smiled and said, ''It's a VR Helmet! I heard a lot of people talking about a new game releasing tomorrow, and I was curious. The News station was giving White Online a lot of praise.''

''White Online?'' Isabella was shocked to see Isaac showing interest in something. She wasn't sure whether it was a good or bad thing that it happened to be that specific game.

''Yes, it seemed interesting, and I decided to try it out,'' Isaac said with modest excitement.

Isabella smiled, seeing that he was excited, but she crossed her arms and asked, ''How much did it cost?''

''Ah...'' Isaac pursed his lips and spoke sheepishly, ''199$.''

Isabella narrowed her eyes, ''Isaac Vayne Whitelock!''

''Alright...'' Isaac scratched his head, ''299$.''

Isabella sighed and smiled wryly, ''I will give you another 100$ but don't you dare spend it on games!''

''Mom, you don't need to,'' Isaac said with embarrassment.

Isabella kissed his cheek and said, ''End of conversation.''

After those words, she returned to the kitchen.

Isaac sighed and shook his head. He finished climbing the stairs to the 4th floor and entered a spacious room.

The room had a massive bed that could easily fit 5 of him.

There were a large wardrobe and a desk next to the window.

A chandelier hung from the ceiling, giving the room a cozy feeling.

The door to his own private bathroom was next to the wardrobe, containing a bathtub, shower, and sink.

Isaac put his VR Helmet on top of the desk and started unpacking it.

After carefully pulling it out, he put the box on the ground and grabbed the VR Helmet.

It was a blue-colored helmet with a white-colored visor.

Isaac knew that it wasn't the most expensive VR Helmet.

The VR Helmet he bought was simply Bronze Ranked.

There were Bronze, Silver, Gold, Platinum, and even Legendary Rank assemblies.

5 Ranks in total.

The Bronze ranked Helmet had a lot of limitations, but Isaac never planned to play the game professionally.

He thought that after 1-week of playing, he would get bored and quit. That was how it always happened when he tried out different hobbies.

Isaac put the VR Helmet back in the box and placed it gently in the wardrobe, behind the hundreds of clothes he had.

''Tomorrow... I am feeling kinda excited, I guess,'' Isaac murmured. His mouth curved into a small smile, and he walked back to the desk.

He opened the cabinet, and there were well over a hundred notebooks!

Isaac took the one on top and opened it.

He started writing everything he'd experienced today. Isaac had been doing this for the past 3 years, but he never got tired of it.

Isaac wrote for half an hour until the last thing he wrote was putting the VR Helmet on the wardrobe.

After that, he closed the notebook and placed it back in the drawer, locking it tightly with his silver-colored key.

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Volume 1 :World of White.
Volume 2 :World of Four Seasons

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Alekzi
AlekziAuteur

After writing 100 chapters, I decided to do a new author review. I have gotten a great response so far, and that gave me a boost of motivation to keep writing this; and after writing 100 chapters, I already know that the story is only beginning, there is so much left to write, and I have a hunch that it will take easily over 1000 chapters to complete, maybe even 2000. Second, I have gotten a few toxic messages about how MC's looks, because he looks girly and is around 170cm, so I have gotten a lot of messages about making him taller, etc., and that may happen or may not, I am not going to spoil it, but I have reasoning for his looks and his height, and none of those will change before I am ready to reveal the reasoning of his looks and what happened in his childhood. Third, I have written a lot of mystery, and I enjoyed it immensely. I have given a few subtle hints on the chapters that might reveal why MC is different from the rest, and that White Online isn't as normal as it seems at first, so good luck on finding those. Fourth, I have seen a few theories made by my readers, and I am sometimes terrified of how well you guys found out about some things which still haven't been revealed yet; it is nice to see all kinds of theories, even though some aren't correct, but it is still nice to read those. Fifth, about a love interest. Some of you guys might have read the synopsis and seen the tags, but I will still say this. This will be a No Harem novel with only one love interest, and even if some of you guys like Harem, you guys should still try and who knows, some of you might like it. I decided to lock the chapters only around the 53th chap so that everyone has enough time to read and find out if they like it enough to keep paying for more chapters. Thanks, everyone for reading, and I hope you guys support me in this very long journey.

Ullyr
UllyrLv15

Alekzi asked me to leave a review as a fellow author and as the editor of this novel, and I will be as truthful as possible. I wanted to read this, as I am a friend to Alekzi, but I couldn't bring myself to do it at first because as an English native, it was difficult for me to deal with the sentence structure. After some chit-chatting, we came to an agreement that I would help him bring the writing up to snuff. It will take a while, but I'll be doing it as fast as I can for his future readers! Daily released chapters will be edited before posting, and I will tackle the former chapters as I can (: As for the story itself, I regret not reading this sooner! Even if there are issues with the grammar, Alekzi has had experience from writing many books before this, and he has truly mastered the art of captivation! The plot of the novel up to current is well thought out, the outline of current and future novel events is meticulously drawn out, and 'almost' every chapter has just enough entertainment to keep you hooked! Isaac is an intelligent (Not a super genius) character who almost completely lacks prior experience in MMO or VRMMO settings. He doesn't just automatically start as the best in the world as is seen in so many other VRMMO novels, and is actually somewhat outclassed in the earlier chapters. As White Online isn't set up like any VRMMO that was released previously in this world, his intelligence and lack of video game experience actually assist him in climbing his way up the ranks from the bottom of the barrell! I have enjoyed my read, and I hope that my work in raising the quality of this novel helps many others enjoy their read as well!

EnterGoodNameHere
EnterGoodNameHereLv14

This review is after reading chapter 151 and as I’m writing this I am nowhere close to being caught up. So some of the things I’m talking about could have changed by now. Alright so the novel overall is pretty good but it has some distinct problems that tend to annoy readers, including me. The story overall has an interesting premise. The characters are interesting and I don’t really dislike any of them(except for the ones your supposed to dislike of course.) The story does tend to fall into some cliches and some situations that don’t make sense at times. Though it’s not really possible to make a completely unique story and for the most part the hiccups aren’t that bad. Now the story itself doesn’t have to many problems, but the ones that it does have show up often enough to be a problem. 1) The author’s first language isn’t English and it’s pretty easy to tell. I personally don’t really care to much but I know it’s a turn off for a lot of people so just pointing it out. 2) In the story the Mc is called a genius by multiple characters as well as the author. This isn’t true at all as he’s shown to be average or slightly above average during the story. (and don’t even get me started on his eq.) The characters calling him a genius is fine as those that do are normally biased and it makes sense coming from them. I would also like to say that this isn’t necessarily a bad thing. The mc doesn’t have to be a genius for a good story. There are plenty of good stories with mcs that are just smart, average, and even ones where the mc is a little slow. I personally think it’s more accurate to call him talented as he’s been confirmed confirmed to learn things fast. 3) This is related to my last point kinda but the author tends to make the Mc not realize certain things that are pretty obvious for the sake of the story. For one it kinda breaks immersion and 2 it further makes calling him a genius seem wrong. As I said before, there’s nothing wrong with your Mc not being a genius, but if based on previous experiences they would be able to figure something out either let them figure it out or change it a bit to where it makes sense that they wouldn’t. The worst part about this one is that within like a minute I can normally think of a small change in the situation or dialogue to make it make sense why he wouldn’t know. It makes it feel like the author isn’t putting that much effort in the story when he doesn’t really come off that way. So overall it’s a really good story premise and I feel like if those problems were fixed the story would be so much better and would probably be a story I’m extremely eager to read instead of just enjoying.

AwfulFist
AwfulFistLv14

While the setting of a VRMMO as a backdrop of a story is by no means unique nowadays, the author has managed to lure and maintain interest using the MC's past and the interesting implementation of gods and historical figure significance in the form of legacies - which in the context of this story is essentially inheriting said historical figure or god's legacy within the game. I have some speculations as to the significance of legacies as the story unfolds and further develops, but will refrain from doing so till more clues and hints are given. Also, the gradual revelations of Isaac's past in the form of out of context character interactions, character behavior, and dialogue is a breath of fresh air as most authors like to info dump their readers within the first few chapters the entire background of their main character. The gradual revelations add a layer of mystery that acts as a driving force for the readers to continue reading in order to find out what exactly happened in Isaac's past for his character and the characters around him to behave in certain ways. It makes for a much more compelling way of storytelling as readers have to piece pieces of the puzzles using the clues that are given at that moment of time in the story. There are some jarring details in the entirety of this novel, however, one of them being the constant mention of how "pretty" or "beautiful" Isaac is. From the constant misperception of his gender as a female from characters that do not know him, to his "flawless" skin that the ladies get jealous with envy of. I will give the benefit of the doubt and have faith that this is an intentional detail that the author has included in this novel and that it will tie in somehow to the bigger picture of the story later on. In addition to this, there are some inconsistencies to the author's use of literary devices - namely foreshadowing. Not gonna spoil it here, but it was the kind of foreshadowing that reveals to the reader in a single sentence what will happen in the future directly in an overtly obvious manner instead of subtly giving a clue. The juxtaposition of author's clever gradual revelations of Isaac, the world, and the characters around him and awkward bad foreshadowing is jarring to say the least- especially when the latter almost completely destroyed the surprise of certain aspects of Isaac's development in the plot that I'm sure will play a big role. Not bashing the author for this too much, but just wanted to give some feedback so such improper use of foreshadowing or any other literary devices would be improved in the future and in his other stories. Overall, this story has potential and whilst it got some flaws, those flaws can fundamentally be improved upon if the author sets his/her mind to it. I am personally eager to see the development of Isaac and the plot and from what I have read so far, I would recommend this to all who may be interested when reading the synopsis and give it a go. To those who may be hesitant to dive in, still give it a try and formulate your own opinions as what others may not enjoy, you may love.

SOUTIEN