In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System

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am not going to lie author you are a very good writer and you wrote you book very well but I can't stand your MC and don't understand everybody nowadays love writing about dark or villain MC but at least I can stand those but your MC killed everybody on his planet or even his universe just for a crazy experiment and then even add the guts to justify himself and the most unreasonable thing that happened was that that st*pid goddess THAT HER JOB WAS TO WEAVE AND SAFEGUARD FATE was like ho okay you have killed trillions cool, cool how about send you to an other with an OP system so you can you do what you do best MASS GENOCIDE instead of Eternal Damnation for you know the innocent people you have killed. and then he reincarnated and the first thing he did for the outside world was to throw a nuke on it killing hundreds of thousands if not millions of people just for a monster sample when he could have done it another way and he dears think of himself as a hero. honestly I am not against killing or a mad scientist but everyone should have a bottom line or even a drop of humanity, let's take Lex Luther he is somewhat a mad scientist and as much as I hate for some his atrocities I respect him a lot because behind every he has done or willing to do when it time to step up to defend humanity he does it Gallantly almost heroic that the kind of humanity everyone should have especially the MC of a story I mean kids read this for Chris sake, we are humans not monster. I used to Miss the good old days were reincarnation and cheat fanfic and novels are based on karma and the good deeds the MC has done to deserve the chance to reincarnate with gifts and powers from the ROB, those were good times honestly. author you are good at writing I mean really, really, really good and i am not writing this review to discourage you in any way, instead I think webnovel needs more good writers which you are one of them. I just want to encourage you to please write an MC with humanity someone with a bottom line with a little bit of positivity, because the world needs more positivity because even I my self have been in a bad place and it's thanks to God and other fictional characters like Spiderman and especially Superman I read some of his comics that didn't involve fighting especially kingdom come I helped me take my mind off the bad stuff and see hope that makes me wonder why I hate Superman in first place, then I got to know Clark Kent not just Superman and the massage his character sent. I wish you could also write positive MC with your talent I wish you good luck

the author is not mentally well enough to be able to create this kind of protagonist. He has no motives for doing what he does nor a sad past that made him have that mentality, just a mentally unbalanced and psychopathic mc. can you at least put the villain label so I don't waste my time reading this.

The history? Very good. The plot? neither good nor bad, the MC seems to like burning entire cities just to defeat the weakest Kaiju in the whole saga (he has a jeager suit, burning the city is unnecessary and edgy) The story has potential, but the MC is just disappointing. The author bit more than he could bite, I'm talking about the knowledge of the MC and his attitudes, the MC does not know how to do anything that does not have to do with the knowledge that the system gave him, Wasn't he a polymath? So why doesn't he seem to know anything about other branches of technology? He only mentions them and ventures into them when the system provides him with the relevant knowledge. About the MC's attitudes, I don't know, but instead of seeming "evil" as the author wants to portray him, he actually acts like a random geek, I talk about his thoughts,the MC has ideas that I could come up with and I'm not a polymath genius. That's why I say and repeat that the author bit off more than he could chew.

It's really hard to find a good pacific ring fanfic, so 5 stars you got, my friend. I'm very excited to read more of this. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

The writing quality is good and it has the potential to be a good story. That being said it isn't the MC seems to just make decisions at random while calling himself intelligent even though his logic is deeply flawed. most of the novel goes on tangents related to either how awesome MC is or some random topic causing the story to be almost non existent. The few times the story does poke through it happens with little explanation as to why or how. An example is him attacking the first kaiju with a satellite which he magically has with no explanation as to how he was able to get it launched into space from his house with nobody the wiser. I was ready for the kaiju to show up hoping the actuall story would start but it's over in less than half a chapter then it's back to listening to the MCs thoughts about stupid stuff that would be fine if it wasn't the entirety of the novel.

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it has potential and is Incredibly well written i can see the effort the author put into this AND I NEED MORE (In all seriousness, Pretty good work)

The Author should go write cultivation novels

his character is decent but needs work unless you have watched the movie or read the books you wouldn't really have any background and the conversation dialogue and and just everything else needs work I like the premise and where it was going but it isn't there and it's just hard to read and boring the author did a good job at trying but it needs improvement

you should put a tag for the novel. like heartless mc or dark. something like that so from the start i dont expect he become good or condoning his act.

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i dont Like the Story or the mc's character too i mean DARK crazy

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This was a great book and it had an even better author.

.......i didn't like the ending ....thats it 🥺

Good book hope you make another one. ?..............................?.........................?........................................................

You had a great story going here but no matter what it is still your decision whether it continues or not

Man it was an interesting story to read for time pass I had fun while reading as the author said all should end.. goodbye 👋🏻👋🏻😭😭 i will miss you