Slothiticus

my point still stands as attention to detail is a part of good writing, even in fiction. Saying they still have a hierarchy is not the same as they have a specific type of hierarchy that was incorrect in the story, showing little research and understanding of the topics that are integral to the story's premise. The way I see it the entire reason to have comment abilities in this app is to give feedback to authors who are developing their writing capabilities which is what I am providing from a logical standpoint that is based on a researched understanding of the topic.

gives me ptsd from playing the first F.E.A.R game in a dark barracks room on a stormy night.

the thunderbird was native to north America not Africa which is why it was being smuggled back by newt.

pretty sure the use of the alien films and the fact I need to pay to read violates copywrite laws

I'm to lazy to say too words on the rare occasion I reference our planet as a whole I would prefer Gaia, Terra, sol-3. Sol-3 being my favorite as it's the only one that doesn't still mean dirt or some personification of it.

you mean your thoughts arnt in third person. I thought everyone's was.

or anywhere

what does this mean, serial killers are typically pretty average looking. It would make sense if it was said he looked like a gangster or aggressive like resting angry face. Serial killers are so dangerous because they could be anyone.