Dimensional Store in Glory City

Here the author, of course I will rate my story with the best☺️☺️☺️☺️. I hope you like it, remember to support me on Patreon, it inspires me to create better

Mc is not likable. Firstly he's been b*t*ing about other mc's having systems forgetting that many of them have to work harder than those with non system based cheats due to the authors' bad personalities. Secondly he's immature as he fails to adapt to the rules of cultivation world and acts like an edgelord (after gaining the system). Thirdly he's an open pervert who blatantly oggles at minor girls' cleavage and while honest about it doesn't really make him a likable character. Aside from that the comedic undertone and products as well as reactions of different parties is humorous. Overall a fun and wish fulfillment-ish fanfic with a whiny yet tolerable mc.

Honestly when it comes to MCs it doesn't get any worse than this. every story is an autobiography of the author in some way or another and the vibes given off from this story sure are creepy. pretty sad overall, the story had potential.

MC is bad. Like REALLy bad. Bad not as a villain or anti hero, but as a character. His character is a mixture of base desires and complexes of the author. ALL The story is just a bad fanfiction of a popular story + a tasteless crossover to other titles. There is literally not a single good moment in it. I don't even know what else to write here. It's like describing a rock by the side of the road, except that's the rock you just pulled out of your shoe. I just can't accept the fact that this story has such a high rating. She is absolutely undeserved.

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I really like this story, although the plot has some gaps, you are forgiven for not being many worthwhile TDG Fanfiction

This history is beautiful. I liked 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Great fanfiction, I haven't seen a good novel about TDG for a long time, but I haven't seen a good novel about the store at all. Liked the MC, not stupid, not trying to hide that he is a pervert, not a Japanese oyash or a Chinese cultivator. The only negative is that there are few chapters and the frequency of updates is not bad, but I would like it to be faster.

A ver cómo seguirá de aquí en adelante. Me parece interesante su idea de poner el mundo patas arriba con sus ventas. Realmente tengo curiosidad para saber hasta donde piensas subir el nivel de cultivo de la ciudad Gloría. Ten en cuenta que en esta novela hay elixires y frutas que te pueden subir hasta el Nivel de Ancestro o Deidad sin esfuerzo. Y sin hablar de los núcleos que producen piedras espirituales.

Very good novel, the system is typical of a store because of the novelty is that it is TGD and I would like it to explore other places that the novel could not since it improved a lot. There are holes in the plot but it is passable (Google translate)

Good novel 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽#######################################################################################################################################

Writing quality is good... but the MC is an actual Pedo. Like, it's not even hidden. He's just an actual creep. Not a good setting for a protagonist. That kind of wish fulfillment is better off kept to yourself rather than set out for the world to see. If he lusted after an older woman, it would be a lot easier to overlook, but this is actually criminal. If that doesn't stop you, then go ahead and read, I guess.

Jangan pikirkan apapun penulis. Tugas kamu adalah update terus tiap hari. Jangan terlalu memikirkan kritik orang, anggap saja itu saran. Jika kritiknya terlalu parah hapus aja

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muy bueno, espero por massssss

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