DetachedDreamer

bro gots a mentally handicap girl calling him master

Decent story, but the MC just trashes heroes for 6 chapters in the beginning. it gets better but leads to an almost apocalyptic level event. all his planning and superior talk, nothing but air. im not really sure what to think of the story overall right now. if he still acts like he's some superior badass genius it'll just sound funny now. I'll revise this if it gets better.

all that planning led to a worse future lol

six chapters of trash talk. my ears hurt from it all.

lol authors gay or so lonely that anything will do.

Had to revise my review. story starts off fun but it starts falling apart pretty quickly. stiff dialogue. and for some stupid, idiotic reason, the OCs in this story, are "Boss" Ryo and "old" Feng. no one actually calls them by their real names. Whos boss is the MC? nobodies. start calling them. Either the author/translator is idiot, Chinese and an idiot, or just blind because its so out of place it goes against the flow. Translation starts breaking down the more you read then you hear the names Boss Ryo and Old Feng 30 times in a chapter, each. it becomes an annoying buzzing in your year and it distracts me from enjoying the story. and this guy has the balls to open a pat reon? lol scum only rips off people with translations like this. bro trying to get people. why the world is going downhill. Trying to take folks money but won't actually work for it with integrity or honor. Just a thief with an A.I. translator to help.

"old feng" lol Jesus what a stupid name.

ya this story is ruined with all the Boss stuff. what Chinese idiot thought that that sounds cool? bad editor and translator.

no one works with him so why the hell do they call him boss? lol only problem that's hard to ignore.