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Beardy
BeardyLv141yr
2023-06-04 04:51

The novel isn’t poorly written, it is easily readable bar the few genders-mishaps. I actually liked the whole premise of the novel in the beginning, it had the potential to go pretty far, there is a few teething issues, mainly the MC’s personality. Unfortunately In 50 chapters it’s slowly delved into a mangled mess, a “patchwork” novel of random nonsense added from various other worlds and modern day. The future is not looking too bright, especially with the upcoming auction and the hunter guild’s so called missions and treasures. With everything that has been introduced or currently mentioned that will be introduced in the future, the author will have serious problems later on when it comes to power scaling. Strongly dislike the other world missions where the MC is not involved and after reading a handful of chapters with the MC barely appearing you begin to wonder if the focus is going to shift to everone but the actual MC. It’s a shame for what could of been, it was an interesting idea ruind by either being too ambitious or the author wanting quick results. Though not in the reamls of trash novel, there are just too many things that force me to take a more “wait and see” approach. Maybe I will come back when there is more chapters and reviews. Wish you all the best.

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Darwin111111
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I understand you completely. I started to say random things out of self-confidence rather than things like worry and etc. Basic things. He forgets that if he leaves his little store he's screwed. Although good. That used to be good. Now it turns out that the store is a heavily armed military base that does not support free speech. When you don't respect freedom of expression because the protagonist is hurt when they speak ill of him or disagree... It becomes a standard Chinese novel where there will be absurd adventures with slapping without much reason or not a sufficiently justified reason. (Sometimes the protagonist is seen as the bad guy and is, in the vast majority of cases, a hypocrite).

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