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CEO in a fantasy world

Fantaisie
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Caesar, one of the richest and most successful businessmen in the world went to bed one day and woke up to find himself in the body of a duke's failure son? No magic talent? Equipped with modern knowledge and his previous talents, how will Caesar adapt to this new world? patreon.com/inserted Ko-fi.com/inserted Discord: https://discord.gg/fWC54SS

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(This one's mostly for the author) The story is in a really good place and I think it has quite the potential of becoming a great novel. There are few concerns that I think can easily be changed and really improve the novel. It's quite wordy but if you have the time, please read it all the way through. I hope it's helpful and that you keep up the great work. Great work so far! 1.) Correct minor grammatical and general syntax errors like punctuation. This will really make the flow of storytelling and reading smoother. 2.) Maintain the consistency of the point of view of the narrative. Sometimes, the narration is suddenly changed to that of the protagonists pov. This is a good technique too but consistency and establishing that "this part is from the protagonist's perspective" is key. 3.) I think to further develop the setting, the author should be more descriptive when it comes to painting a picture of the place, things, etc. especially when it's the first time mentioning said object. The readers should be able to easily imagine the vibe and energy of the place through descriptions. Same with the character's attitude and physical attributes. 4.) To really establish what kind of person this character is, I think it's important to be consistent with the manner in which they speak. Be it formally, rudely, with an accent, like an aristocrat, or whatever. Using jargons and modifying to tone of their words should do the trick. Lastly, 5.) Like what the other readers mentioned, the flow of the story is quite fast compared to others, now this isn't necessarily a negative thing it's just that it's imperative that the author knows that these developemyns are be an opportunity for the readers to truly get to know the character and the whole of the novel.

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