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Dragon_God123
Dragon_God123Lv55yr
2019-05-21 19:16

Thought i would get a villainous mc but got some righteous messiah. Thats why i am dropping. The novel isn't bad but its just not to my liking. Mc was cold but then became like hero(ruthless but still a hero) ,killing nobles, abolishing slavery and became a hero to the masses. Wanted a villain, got a hero

CEO in a fantasy world

Tristan_H_Brown
4.4
14 Chs

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Tristan_H_Brown
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Hi guys, author here. I just wanted to thank everyone for their power stones or their reviews. All of your guys support is greatly appreciated and always brings a smile to my face. Thank you guys :)

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Calligraphy_Art
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hehehe... This novel is kind of a road trip... If you enjoy ruthless main characters this is for you.... If you enjoy smart main characters this is for you.... if you enjoy extremely handsome main characters (like seriously the mc's handsomeness is described many times) this is for you. If you enjoy battles and a lot of cool descriptions than this is for you. I don't like peace loving pussy mc's which a lot of novels have but this one is the exact opposite. A truly domineering MC in this book. I haven't been on this site for that long (hence my level) but man this is a hidden gem.

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Hinatasan
HinatasanLv4

(Writing this on my phone so pardon any spelling errors) I honestly thought this was going to be a light hearted and boring story but boy was I wrong the latest chapter (7) gave me goosebumps..... I really enjoy this book so far and it seems as though the authors imagination is very elegant? So to speak, a lot of clothing and horses and carriages are described to be beautiful and such. Great boon so far please author update more!

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shakespearefrien
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I know this is a really early review but the grammar is quite decent and i'm already loving the way I think the magic system is going to go. I hope author updates quite frequently

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seveyn4sty
seveyn4styLv4

I like it. I really do not understand how this novel is not among the top 10. it is simply wonderful please if you have a patreon put it in the description of I would be happy to donate to increase the amount of chapters. Writing Quality : I can not say that it is perfect but it does not have many errors according to my knowledge in English. ★★★★ Stability of Updates : I really would love but chapters but you have a life I suppose anyway thank you __ In other words .. It's never good enough for me if I had 50 chapters a day you can bet I would arrange a schedule to read them all. ★★★★★ Story Development : Amazing!!! you do not dump tons of unnecessary information in the beginning chapters and that's very good! it all came with your time. ★★★★★ Character Design :Already found a badass MC? Forget them all !! here you will know the true meaning of badass !. the guy is a fucking vampire! Fuck, he's a fucking vampire !! and I have not finished yet the guy is a walking library of weapons imagine this all combined in a medieval setting that does not even have ballistas or crossbows!!! fucking hell. ★★★★★ World Background : So far pleasant is still in chapter 16. ★★★★★

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nOoDlEdAnCeHeRe
nOoDlEdAnCeHeReLv4

It is a bit early to leave a review but as a lover of outstanding creations, this deserves my praise... I am a person that have read approximately a million of books ,mostly are from diversed platforms and whether it is good or bad, I tend to finish every single one of them... In this span none of them piqued my interest like this one did.... Keep up the good work and hoping it will not turn to a clichéd route like most of the stories do... Hoping for the success of this story and may God bless this story....

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KimSasha
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Writing Quality: - I didn’t see errors and it was easy to read to me even if English isn’t my first language. - Be careful not to put too many different points of view in the same chapter and/or to separate your paragraphs. For example, Chapter 8 was difficult to follow. Story: - The progress of the story is a little bit fast. I would have liked to get to know the MC a little better, but that's not a bad thing. We still have time to find out. Also, it would have been nice to know how he was adapting to the new world. It always makes me laugh how quickly the characters get used to it. I’m dead/changed world? Ok, whatever. But maybe it’s just me x) -Your action scenes are good and I loved how you handled emotions in chapter 11. Character: -I love the MC and how he is badass and know how to use his brain. His character is good. I love his calm in the dire situation. - I found hard to believe that Sebastian could believe that Ceasar changed so easily but his character is still good. World: - I loved how you didn’t throw all new information in one shot. It helped to understand better the world. -I would love to see better how our MC will use his knowledge of his world in the new one. To resume, big potential. Keep up the good work.

6yr
hawlol
hawlolLv4

Sumary: If you like to read a fast paced story about a "marvelous" and "perfect" MC that gets things done easily with his cheats and flirts with waifus in between, this is for you. It was not for me. Had a good fast paced start with the premise of a megacorporation CEO transmigrating into the body of a a good for nothing noble in a fantasy world. But the CEO aspect in the title means nothing to the story. He doesn't make a mega corporation or something like that, but resolves everything thought raw violence. And this 'power' to beat anyone and everyone came for free through the system as an 'evolution' perk. Basically a random cheat he got in the beginning for no reason. Also, the story quickly devolved into a wish fulfillment tale where the MC is too amazing and gets things done too easily. Characters are one dimensional and the story becomes TOO fast paced, except when he's flirting with girls(mostly Ahri the Foxkin), which you'll then get several chapters of it. Every woman is mesmerized by his looks, everything he 'invents' is amazing an revolutionizes the world, people cheer and worship him, etc etc, all by chapter 30.

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carlwash_1
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Ok this story is fantastic. It has a great flow and it really pulls you in. I quite enjoy how it developing and can't wait to see you where it goes

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megamarie
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it is definitely a great novel. the writing quality is the author is superb. i was left at the edge of my seat every chapter. each chapter made me crave for more. the world background and character design were definitely top grade. i love these intelligent, bad ass, deadly and cruel with a heart type of mcs and ceaser definitely fits that criteria. as for story development i know there's more for us to see. 😍😍😍😍😍

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