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Hi guys, author here. I just wanted to thank everyone for their power stones or their reviews. All of your guys support is greatly appreciated and always brings a smile to my face. Thank you guys :)
hehehe... This novel is kind of a road trip... If you enjoy ruthless main characters this is for you.... If you enjoy smart main characters this is for you.... if you enjoy extremely handsome main characters (like seriously the mc's handsomeness is described many times) this is for you. If you enjoy battles and a lot of cool descriptions than this is for you. I don't like peace loving pussy mc's which a lot of novels have but this one is the exact opposite. A truly domineering MC in this book. I haven't been on this site for that long (hence my level) but man this is a hidden gem.
(Writing this on my phone so pardon any spelling errors) I honestly thought this was going to be a light hearted and boring story but boy was I wrong the latest chapter (7) gave me goosebumps..... I really enjoy this book so far and it seems as though the authors imagination is very elegant? So to speak, a lot of clothing and horses and carriages are described to be beautiful and such. Great boon so far please author update more!
I know this is a really early review but the grammar is quite decent and i'm already loving the way I think the magic system is going to go. I hope author updates quite frequently
I like it. I really do not understand how this novel is not among the top 10. it is simply wonderful please if you have a patreon put it in the description of I would be happy to donate to increase the amount of chapters. Writing Quality : I can not say that it is perfect but it does not have many errors according to my knowledge in English. ★★★★ Stability of Updates : I really would love but chapters but you have a life I suppose anyway thank you __ In other words .. It's never good enough for me if I had 50 chapters a day you can bet I would arrange a schedule to read them all. ★★★★★ Story Development : Amazing!!! you do not dump tons of unnecessary information in the beginning chapters and that's very good! it all came with your time. ★★★★★ Character Design :Already found a badass MC? Forget them all !! here you will know the true meaning of badass !. the guy is a fucking vampire! Fuck, he's a fucking vampire !! and I have not finished yet the guy is a walking library of weapons imagine this all combined in a medieval setting that does not even have ballistas or crossbows!!! fucking hell. ★★★★★ World Background : So far pleasant is still in chapter 16. ★★★★★
It is a bit early to leave a review but as a lover of outstanding creations, this deserves my praise... I am a person that have read approximately a million of books ,mostly are from diversed platforms and whether it is good or bad, I tend to finish every single one of them... In this span none of them piqued my interest like this one did.... Keep up the good work and hoping it will not turn to a clichéd route like most of the stories do... Hoping for the success of this story and may God bless this story....
Writing Quality: - I didn’t see errors and it was easy to read to me even if English isn’t my first language. - Be careful not to put too many different points of view in the same chapter and/or to separate your paragraphs. For example, Chapter 8 was difficult to follow. Story: - The progress of the story is a little bit fast. I would have liked to get to know the MC a little better, but that's not a bad thing. We still have time to find out. Also, it would have been nice to know how he was adapting to the new world. It always makes me laugh how quickly the characters get used to it. I’m dead/changed world? Ok, whatever. But maybe it’s just me x) -Your action scenes are good and I loved how you handled emotions in chapter 11. Character: -I love the MC and how he is badass and know how to use his brain. His character is good. I love his calm in the dire situation. - I found hard to believe that Sebastian could believe that Ceasar changed so easily but his character is still good. World: - I loved how you didn’t throw all new information in one shot. It helped to understand better the world. -I would love to see better how our MC will use his knowledge of his world in the new one. To resume, big potential. Keep up the good work.
Sumary: If you like to read a fast paced story about a "marvelous" and "perfect" MC that gets things done easily with his cheats and flirts with waifus in between, this is for you. It was not for me. Had a good fast paced start with the premise of a megacorporation CEO transmigrating into the body of a a good for nothing noble in a fantasy world. But the CEO aspect in the title means nothing to the story. He doesn't make a mega corporation or something like that, but resolves everything thought raw violence. And this 'power' to beat anyone and everyone came for free through the system as an 'evolution' perk. Basically a random cheat he got in the beginning for no reason. Also, the story quickly devolved into a wish fulfillment tale where the MC is too amazing and gets things done too easily. Characters are one dimensional and the story becomes TOO fast paced, except when he's flirting with girls(mostly Ahri the Foxkin), which you'll then get several chapters of it. Every woman is mesmerized by his looks, everything he 'invents' is amazing an revolutionizes the world, people cheer and worship him, etc etc, all by chapter 30.
Ok this story is fantastic. It has a great flow and it really pulls you in. I quite enjoy how it developing and can't wait to see you where it goes
it is definitely a great novel. the writing quality is the author is superb. i was left at the edge of my seat every chapter. each chapter made me crave for more. the world background and character design were definitely top grade. i love these intelligent, bad ass, deadly and cruel with a heart type of mcs and ceaser definitely fits that criteria. as for story development i know there's more for us to see. 😍😍😍😍😍
Hulk was a pro football player, a guy who loved nothing more than clutching a pigskin and barreling through the defense like a runaway freight train. He lived for the gridiron. But he never, in his wildest dreams, imagined he'd see a pair of nipples bigger than a football. He became a giant baby, reborn with a new name: Orion. Orion was the runt of the giant litter, the weakest of the bunch. But when he turned ten, something crazy happened. He saw a strange panel – that not only displayed his stats but also helped him level up. With the panel's help, and a whole lot of elbow grease, Orion led his giant tribe to become the most powerful in the Barren Mountains. He went from zero to hero, becoming a mighty Titan King. He was no longer the runt; he was the top dog.
Cheng Yan travels through time, only to end up becoming an honorable prince in the Middle Ages of Europe. Yet this world was not quite as simple as he thought. Witches with magical powers abound, and fearsome wars between churches and kingdoms rage throughout the land. Roland, a prince regarded as hopeless by his own father and assigned to the worst fief, spends his time developing a poor and backward town into a strong and modern city, while fighting against his siblings for the throne and absolute control over the kingdom. Join Roland as he befriends and allies with witches and, through fighting and even farming, pushes back invaders from the realm of evil.
Dying after getting bitten by a zombie, the main character finds himself in the world of fantasy. Reincarnating as the mid-rank villain, he decided to live differently and avoid the main cast. After all who would like to live as an arrogant brat only to die like a dog? However, just as he resolved to live a better life, [Ding!] [This world is not the same as the host knows. Because of the tragic ends, the God of Fortune has reversed the time and has allowed the main heroines to retain their memories.] Yeah, he is done for. ****** Additional tags: Possessive characters, no Yaoi, no Yuri, no ntr. ***** A/N:- The main character would be overpowered but not to the point where he could defeat his enemies with a snap of his fingers. This novel would be more focused on character development, slice of life, and romance.
[ Warning: Mature content R-18 ] Is death a new begining? For Max, it was. Max, a twenty-year-old virgin, got attacked by a bear in forest and died an untimely death. Fortunately for him... that wasn't the end to his story. In the next instant, he found himself transmigrated into the body of a noble's youngest son in a world full of Magic, wonders and... beautiful women. As if God was making up for his untimely death, he also got a system -The Lust System. "I can become stronger just by having sex?" Join the journey of Max and watch he have the time of his life and become the strongest mage the world had ever seen before. ______________________________ [Things to be noted] 1. From the title, you should've guessed it already but let me tell you the story will be filled with many sexual adventures. So... you are welcome to enjoy them..... 2. However... don't expect MC to have sexual relations with every woman he meets. I'll be focusing on the story, and would 'Try' not to blindly throw sex scenes left and right. 3. Most importantly, this is my first time writing so the the quality of first 50 or so may be a bit lacking (But it would cause you no problem if a few minor errors don't bother you). 4. It is a slow paced story. If you want everything to be explosive and fast, maybe this isn't for you. Important Note: If you enjoy the story then don't forget to vote your GTs, Power stones and also if you can, send some GIFTS too. This poor soul would appreciate it. Also check out My other work: [ Rise of the Strongest War God ] & [ My perverted devil system ] Happy reading~ ________________
What do the words Third-Rate Villain mean? Doesn't every human being possess their own background story? Just because a game hadn't explored one's background story, does it mean those characters are irrelevant? In a world where video games come to life, Astron Natusalune is introduced as a seemingly insignificant character—a third-rate villain with a minor role. However, this ordinary facade belies a haunting past that has shaped Astron into the vengeful soul he has become. Someone who would do everything for his vengeance. What will occur if Astron's soul combines with one from Earth? Will he relinquish his position as a third-rate villain, or will he forge a new path? Driven by a singular purpose—to avenge his sister's tragic death and bring justice to a cruel world—Astron embarks on a transformative journey. Witness the journey of the Astron as the young boy experiences a profound shift in his own values as he witnesses firsthand the consequences of unchecked vengeance and the true complexities of morality. -----------------------------------0------------------------------------ Chapter length 1750-2500 At least one chapter a day. You can check my discord if you want. You will be able to see the illustrations here and engage in a conversation with me if I am available. https://discord.gg/BQRMhDxZr8
The people of Earth have been summoned once again. Scientists document six extinction events in Earth's history, but none of them were as natural as they claimed. Sylas and his family have been called back to the Browns, a family of billionaire elites with assets reaching into the trillions. He isn't sure what to expect until he touches a floating bronze cube that changes his life. [Bronze City Stele] [Status: Dormant] [Time to Activation: 04:13:38] Unfortunately, there's only one Stele and the Browns have already decided upon their candidates. If Sylas wants to control his own fate, he'll have to enter the Trial. Now, woefully unprepared, and stuck in a world filled with the extinct creatures of Earth, he'll have to carve out his own opportunity... whether the Browns like it or not. ======================== https://discord.gg/awespec instagram: @awespec_
Here's the link to the discord server: https://discord.com/invite/XVNaUKEPmb The convolution of worlds are govern by a set of gods, each god is given a world to rule and there can be skirmishes between them – as a result of one between Nexus, the god of trickery and a senile old hag Elliot reincarnated into Ul’Tra-el by mistake. Ul’Tra-el is a world that grew a voice, because of this voice, it began to take a different path from other worlds -- it was filled with a core anomaly – rifts. Dimensions began to leak into each other, vomiting outrageous monsters. In response or as an auto-correction to such anomaly, talents were awakened in the inhabitants of Ul’Tra-el and they gained tremendous power, for every rift they close down, they were rewarded massively by the voice of the world called Ul. In a hardcore world like this one, our MC (Northern) reincarnated as a talentless individual but in the face of a death and a head splitting revelation... ...when all hopes seemed lost. {System Notice} Your Soul cannot take a form Searching for Unique pattern ability for your soul searching... search found. Unique System ability has been found... Unique System Ability [CopyCat] has been gained. Awakening Unique ability... Northern gained a talent copying system! ... Follow Northern through his journey as he becomes the pinnacle of this world. This a story about a white-haired boy’s rise from rubbles!! Note: This is an overpower genre but MC does not just start off like that. Even though MC can copy talents he doesn't just jump around copying talents because there's a limitation. However, his rise to strength is depicted and is an experience to enjoy. The first few hundreds would be frustrating to follow because MC is weak but that makes the experience all the more interesting when MC finally gets freaking strong and starts wiping the floor with everyones asses.
The human Race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward. Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities. Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves. Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open. But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around. He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete. "It is time to feed!" "You must drink human blood within 24 hours" "Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed" https://discord.gg/kqCxfZF6xH Instagram: JKSManga OTHER WORKS My Werewolf System My Dragon System