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Lisez le roman (Hiatus) The Most OP Young Master écrit par l'auteur Lazy_Author69 publié sur WebNovel. I will just say this now so no one can't complain. I may use some characters from different animes but I may not be able to imitate or capture their personalities or characters. I'm very sorry if that...

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I will just say this now so no one can't complain. I may use some characters from different animes but I may not be able to imitate or capture their personalities or characters. I'm very sorry if that is the case and there will be many plot holes in this novel so forgive me for that. That's all, if you enjoy thank you. Anyway the story will focused more on chat group while his system is just gonna be a support one and finally this is a harem novel. The MC is brokenly Overpowered and has a strong plot armor so don't expect to see him suffer much. In this novel our mc is gonna be the most op young master in the multiverse. Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters except my original and any of the stories that he will go to.

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Humans aren't as wise and knowledgeable, they say, because when those monsters suddenly came 72 years ago and caused chaos all around the world, many of them first thought it was just all made out of lies until they experienced it themselves. Not long before humanities goes extinct, those people who have ‘awakened’ showed strength and courage to fight back against them. That's how humans survive and keep those creatures at bay. Ever since then, humans have made a national association and corporation for those 'awakened' people who wish to help annihilate those monsters and earn money in the process. That's how everyone came to admire and make it a job that is highly paid but with also many high requirements to meet. The association and corporation also added a ranking for those awakeners. Highest to Lowest 1. Shikari 2. Orion 3. Nimrod [Status Window] has also appeared. It came off a bit insulting at first when it made an appearance for it has the rank in its contents and many awakeners' rank are different from their association and corporation's rank it gives to them. It was quite a memorable controversy. They immediately changed their inaccurate ranking and made it the same as it does in their [Status Window]. Of course, some aren't happy with it 'cause it lowers their ranks but they couldn't do anything. As time passes by, the world finally has its strongest awakener. He's the strongest in the entire world that he was bestowed a rank higher than Shikari. The Venerer, Adonis, lived to be hated and loved by many people. Everybody has their eyes for him, jealousy or obsession. But the world knows he's already taken. Shouldn't be touched nor be stared at. Captivated by a witch nonetheless. It's almost irritating honestly because the witch is almost a Venerer like the strongest. Eve, Duchess of Evil, is friends with the strongest and they are the only ones who know that their relationship isn't like that. After all, Adonis wouldn't like going out with his co-worker and even if they aren't, he will never wreck a happily married woman and her husband's life. It's not important anymore whether he likes her or not, what only matters is that she's married. He had no plans to tell her because it's simply not worthy. So in his last moment, his last day in this world tried to make him regret what he should have said. "You sure you don't need me in there? I can defend, heal, and support you, y'know! Hell, I can attack too!" Surely, it's a tempting offer but Adonis wouldn't want to keep his friend from her husband. It's their anniversary today. So he refused her and went into raiding a new catastrophe. It was a new hell. Adonis called it the Abyss for this hellhole did not just have monstrous creatures but it also contained a new huge threat in humankind. That creature has no name as it slowly reduces their numbers little by little. Until he's the only one who survived all of its intent to kill him. But of course, he wouldn't be unscathed and he even died from bleeding in the process. He really does have no regrets or that was he was trying to get inside his head. It was only how his mother died. If he wasn't so focused on his job, he would've been there and she could've lived much longer. Adonis has accepted that everyone dies in the end but she could have been with him more than God had planned. It's not a deep regret but a hopeless wish. So Adonis was really surprised when instead of waking up in the land of paradise, he woke up in his old apartment where he used to live in the past before he became the strongest. Then his wish has truly become hopeless. After all, he only lived in this apartment after his mother died from a catastrophe. “What is even my purpose for sending me back here? My mother's already dead. There's nothing to do in this world.”

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TougherAgenda
TougherAgendaLv13TougherAgenda

I can understand that if you were getting low ratings you would rewrite but you rewrite when doing oretty well, sadly ill be dropping this as its a waste of time to waut for it to start iver again i wish you the best if LuCk mate

XXgamer_98
XXgamer_98Lv13XXgamer_98

So far I like the fic. The cheats that he(MC) got are not broken. It all depends on how much work he is willing put in his training. For example if he didn't start training early on he would still be a weakling. The cheats does not make him OP without doing anything. The writing quality is pretty good. There are some errors in the sentences that could've been wrote better. There is a little problem with the Author fat-fingering some letters sometimes but it's nothing major. So far I've only noticed 4 or 5 of these mistakes in all the chapters combined. Well that's it. Hopefully the Author read this so he can fix those minor problems. (P.S.- I recomend Author to start using grammarly. Even the free version will be good to have it because it will automatically highlight the words with a red line that have spelling mistakes.)

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

Friendship, justice and good feelings - what a great qualities... Unfortunately they couldn't give you an intresting story by themselves. And that's what happens here. That's just uninteresting. Either way, for akkikan 2.0, at least you have better grammar. And more consistent characters? Hmm...

Dekxz
DekxzLv4Dekxz

Good start. And i need more chaps,☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Azazel_69
Azazel_69Lv3Azazel_69

Great story. . . .. . .. . .. . . . . . . .. . .-..-.-..-..---.......-.-..-...-..-..-..-..-......-.-.....-.-..-.-...-.-..-.-..-.-.-.--...

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I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv13I_am_inevitable

I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fantastic_Spirit
Fantastic_SpiritLv14Fantastic_Spirit

I'm assuming its a crossover world considering the amount of characters in it. But anyway, I've seen other fanfictions where they try to force a scene in, and just please don't do that. I'm not here to discourage you, on the contrary I would like you to continue but there are some things that are very difficult to have to read. Example; MC: Ring that hides magical power from someone close to the top in DxD Redheaded Girl Who can barely classify as high class: Finds out when he did nothing that would warrant attention. Like really don't pull stuff like this. No diss to the author who wrote the novel who's scenario I'm using if you recognize.

Gilandcheese
GilandcheeseLv3Gilandcheese

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Infamous_Fitz
Infamous_FitzLv2Infamous_Fitz

The updating and writing quality is good it's just the world background and story development Is what i have a problem with cause we don't know what world the mc is in but eugeo from sao is in the same world as him then right after the mc meets eugeo he tries to adopt him just cause it's eugeo and the parents agreed and the mc and his parents are archdukes so they would never adopt someone just cause their son asked them to another thing that doesn't make sense is the mc found while he went outside by himself with no guards or anybody

Yanagi_sense1
Yanagi_sense1Lv13Yanagi_sense1

Story is good...grammar is good...character interactions are good and the anime worlds that are combined all blend well..overall good job and jeep up the good work

JOKER_JAY
JOKER_JAYLv4JOKER_JAY

this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work

Kumaa
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Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3Salmon_El_Solomon

great level, continue with the work, but since it feels a bit forced and pointless, you should change the age of the protagonist, 3 years and he already knows how to read, practice mana and body training, all that is very exaggerated, apart from the wishes you could nephew it, saying go what it has is body potential not a rapid compression, making the childhood arc last longer and explaining more the world and the systems, such as school, etc., since there are amusement parks, as it does not go If there are schools where do they get all the science or studies they require?

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