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Man... You can't read properly?? He says almost 50 times this isn't a harem ff
A friendly reminder, she is obsessed at a border Yandere, she only wanted the attention of bell and become him stronger, watching the series or the novel you will notice bell never is in true danger unless the thing Whit Takemikazuchi family, in all the problems he was protected by someone, ottar, Loki family, etc
I want, not I desire to see that, but that could be really easy, because if she is obsessed whit the mc , the mc could easy became her a simp
This is just my opinion, I don't plan to insult or offend anyone. Honestly this started out great, I'm currently on Chapter 500, I honestly don't know how I got this far, this is shit, the author doesn't get tired of finding ways to nerf the mc to the point that it reaches totally stupid levels, the "mc's love" relationships progress extremely slowly, 400 chapters and the mc still hasn't started a relationship with a woman who clearly expresses her feelings for him (izzanami), the concepts of the different energies are totally contradictory and terribly formulated unless you have a concept like giving the mc more power without any sense and nerfing it in an extreme way, an example his power of destruction and being the son of sirzech, those 2 things are honestly only there to filler and so the mc can fuck venelana. and regarding the powers, although in the first ones, I think 50 chapters (training with scathatch and obtaining semblant) are the only moments in which the mc trains or rather his strength improves, after going to campione he no longer trains, he does not develop his powers nor look for a way to increase his strength, he could easily fight Shiva or any other god of destruction in that world and improve his power of destruction, look for any deity related to other things in which he is good like magic, martial arts, etc. And regarding the concepts of energy, the mc has "little magical energy and demonic power" and his "seed" of power of destruction grows with the power of his soul but then reviewing the story the mc received a boost from the primordial runes, the blessing of Odin, his semblant (nourishes his soul passively and makes it more robust), he received the blessing of meridia, energy of bleach's soul, even despite all that the mc is still pathetically weak, let's not forget that apart from all that his "seed" of destruction is nourished by the sword of destruction...
This isn't adapted from MTL it's the MTL, the writing quality it's a shit ..................,............... . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. .
The story it's good , but the mc it's pathetic and stupid beyond limits, at chapter 120 he already has tens of millions of points and he doesn't buy anything,and the "fear" of his sister at first funny at the end it's stupid and pathetic (the important thing must be tell twice),and I think is lacking in world construction, like ai and the twins are there only to figure they are almost like an npc waiting for the mc to arrive, when they could be more interesting, like them goin to the shop whit the mc or to another worlds,also it happen the same whit the rest of the characters like bocchi or D,
I'm in
And narcisa
Sirius is the heir, also it could be counter the mother of nimphadora thonks
mee to, but remember she can transform,so that could open a space for jokes or comic situations