Yet Another Ray With A System

Warhammer ref? Guns? Sci-fi Sh8t? Lolis? quite fun to read :D AND SO----- 5 Stars because why not it's good and enjoyable :D ---------------------------

So, 200k words had passed and I think now is a good time to put a review. My own writing skill and quality is questionable at best. Most of the time is bad. Not straight trash but like less expressive and describing and more straight to point kind of writing because my vocabulary is small. Then my accuracy of characters is bad because I rely on my 8 years ago memories of animes I watch + fandom and other sites like youtube or reddit. My OC characters is bland because I'm not good at designing creative characters. For updates, I can't promise. sometime fast some time slow. Currently is fast because I have a lot of free time. Also another thing is I write for fun so I doubt there will be serious effort on my side to improve but I try because Im lazy. A Slothful Cat that turned to Daoist Cat but still a Lazy Cat.

This should be a good story to be honest, but unfortunately mc's attitude makes the reader angry and emotional, he is too easy to use by women and loli of course, I have Expectations were high at the start of the story but in that part of DxD it let me down, he became their slave. For those who don't like mc simp or harem don't read this.

ok just helping the author for the review + i currently enjoy reading this