I've uploaded the rewrite.
Check it out.
After hearing some comments and ideas, I'm planning to add some vampires to the story.
Since the timeline is before WW 1, no real threat is there, so some vampires to make things interesting.
I'm planning to make some chapters and then to WW 2 where he will be one of the rich guy to be part of Super Soldiers project.
I've added some charecters there as well.