Seven Sins Demon Fox

I will be ashamed to write this review of my own novel. This is the first novel I write, I spent a lot of time writing and decided to publish for everyone to see, the writing is not the best because my native language is not English. Hope you like it!!! The main character is a little discreet at first, but throughout the novel you will fall in love with Nicola.

i read a few chapters but i dont even think i can call them chapters. They are way to short. when i saw 100 chapters i was like wow thats good going but now seeing that each chapter is like 500 words, thats way to short. author you need to make them longer man. 1500 is like a standard. a good place is around 2000. but they are way to short, it doesnt work. At least for me

I havent finished but so far its a really good read. Its better than that Golden Fox fanfic. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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This book shows great thought being put into it. I hope the writer will keep up there creation. The biggest draw back is the gender changes on Characters. Like Kin and Gin are they both boys or is one a boy and the other Girl since one is from an Emperor fungi and the other is an Empress fungi? Please if it not to much extra work can we keep it straight on all Characters?

it's very good great concept although wasn't used to full potential but the grammer is good you, if you are a fan of non he man mc this is great because in the future he won't have a human mc either so read I liked it

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So speechless. This book deserves a merit! Your writings flow is elegant and fascinating! I could feel the vibes of the story and the plot twists and turns is truly a rock wohoo! Guys, I recommend you all to read to this book you won't be disappointed trust me! This author deserves the best and his fluent words flow like a lake..I've been avidly reading this in the first place. C'mon try it out, you couldn't wait to find you along in the journey! The paragraph and writing isn't messy, no grammatical errors so far and very neat writing which pleasant in the eyes. It was portrayed beautifully ahh can't wait for more releasee hehe💗🎉🎉

it quite a nice novel with an interesting mc and I'm looking forward to seeing how it goes , just wish the chaps where longer but oh well it does matter that much 👍

Writing quality- Though sometimes the grammar is not the best, the story is still readable to a level where u can understand what's happening without getting confused. Stability of updates- It's too a level I am satisfied with reading it leisurely but still have a craving for more. Story development- The story flows like water, to where it doesn't feel rushed or slow-paced but normal. Character design- Most of the characters in the novel don't seem like one-dimensional creations that only know how to have one emotion. World background- Pretty vast with it being introduced in snippets that allow u to remember it with no problems and getting bored with info dumps. Suggestion- Author if u want to make ur story a little more popular try to make ur chapters a tad bit longer like 1000 words to 1200. U don't have to take this seriously but just consider it.

Very interesting concept, but unfortunately it get's more and more boring with every new chapter: - no character development (MC don't change at all - even these evolutions only purpose is to give abilities that will bee needed in upcoming chapters), - no world building, though there were attempts, - boring leveling system, that looks more like crippled version of dnd, - story flow is more like console log, if you read only first and last paragraph of the chapter you wouldn't lose anything, - no romance (why is that tag is even here?), - no cultivation (only grind like in good old korean mmorpg). Usually I never do such reviews but I'm so sad and disappointed at story development and progression that couldn't stay mute about it.

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the Book has a very good story background with many mysteries that are progressively being found out through out the story 5/5. The writing isnt bad, mistakes here and there but not common, showing that author has a good concept of what is going on in the world and what is going to happen 5/5. The story development was rocky at the beginning but got better later on, not a 5 start but close 4/5. The character design is good starting with an unknown to highly detained report on what MC is later on makes it feel like we are learning with MC 5/5. I haven't read the whole thing yet only about 80% done so I dont know the stability of the updates so im going to just put it at 5 star 5/5.

esta historia é muito boa tendo criatividade na hora de realizar,utiliza seus elementos perfeitamente não forçando um prota ou personagens genericos captando a atençao e interesse do leitor

this is one of the best books I've ever read i would say it's up their with demons virtue the person making this book is an amazing writer and i commend their skills