Magn0lia

Also, I really like gore stories with ruthless character, extra points if they're a villain who has no lines they won't cross.

Magnolia here, I'll start from the top. Writing Quality wise, it's readable in my eyes, I don't see any spelling errors or grammars errors, then again, I tend to fill in the gaps myself subconsciously, but it seems fine. Stability of Updates, it's pretty good. I mean, the chapter are consistent and I'm not waiting weeks on end for another chapter. Story Development is pretty good. Nothing is dragged on for too long, and nothing is too quick in my opinion. I like the feeling of the death game, and how things are progressing. SPOILERS ((Especially, what happened during their recent mission in the desert.)) Character Design, I'm not sure if the Author described what the characters look like or not, I don't exactly remember. But that's not really an issue for me regardless. The character design is fine, but my only issue is with the emotions. It's mainly a personal desire, but I like calm anger, in the sense where there's a lot action, but few words spoken by the character, like their actions speak enough for them. World Background is 5/5 since the novel pretty much started, there hasn't been much development on the world besides 1 level after another. Will add another review once there are more chapters I suppose.

???? What exactly happened here? He snatched her hair and she died?

xD Humor me, its fiction

Im with it

Hear me out, I know its an insane thought, but how about no harem for once.

Anissa :3

Dang, I liked this quite a bit.

Loving this.

Ya know, I thought something was weird, but the name "Maxim" and "Fifi" confirmed it. This is literally just the game "Isekai: Slow Life".