Mangaka in the StrawHats

Honestly I like the idea of how the mc’s power works but it could have been implemented better in a different situation. Also I absolutely hate when a MC has the perception of a brick completely unaware of what is happening around them.

Good idea executed well until nami joined the crew Mc started to show off his stereotypical Chinese fanfic protagonist personality and everybody else got pushed away into the corner so Mc can have his time with nami

I just don't like the fact that he doesn't know his manga's powers. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Didnt expect the concept to be so interesting. One piece characters enter the manga that the MC draws. First is Luffy entering Akame ga kill. Keep going pls

un truc que je coimprend pas avec les traducteur chinois pourquoi laisser juste traduire et pas changer 2 . 3 mot ou mieux elver toute les exppressions chinoise dans les oeuvres ? CE SERAI tellement mieux je veux dire les gens lise pas le chinois a cause de mis ensemble qui sont bizarre a lire voire cringe c'est juste un conseil , mais si vous traduiser les oeuvres chinoise alors enlever tout ce qui fait chinois , il y aura tout de suite plus de gens et de meilleur note

I can see it, Luffy is going to rizz up Esdeath.

I like how the story is going. The main character has a cool cheat, draw manga and get rewards for people who enter and get stronger from it. But what I don't like is how fking moronic the mc is. I'm not taking about how he acts but this mfker got a system [Ding!] and didn't even check it because something happened on the ship and then completely forgot he had a system 30 chapters in (the ding happen around chapter 16ish) and still the dude hasn't checked the fking system Overall if the mc wasn't so dumb it would be great. If you like how the mc is oblivious to literally everything going on around them then this book is for you It's like those stupid troupes where the mc is invincible but still thinks he's a mortal without power, like "I'm a cultivation bigshot?" "I swear I'm not the demon lords lackey" etc

I like everything except that the Mc doesn't know it yet

Yes I like the concept of getting into manga so keep going don't stop updating

The amount of errors in grammar and translation are too many. It's almost none edition, not different from MTL, and it became worse the farther you read. Only thing that keeps me to read this is the plot.

Had potential but then the MC just takes everyone’s powers lol the story is complete trash

the writing quality is bad and nothing going on makes and sense at all. the original chinese author must have been smoking crack, and then the translator must have been on meth.

Review from chapter 1-94 Grammar is bad, like seriously bad, at least throw this into a grammar checker, even today chatGPT can help you here. The story gets boring when he realizes people can get into his manga and he gains their power ups too. Everything after that chapter is just the MC showing off like an average Chinese cultivator protagonist, slapping others left and right and enemies yelling “you dare!”. So yes everything on the story is bland and insipid.

I mean, I like everything, but the fact that I practically get everything that others have with effort, just getting it like that is boring. If only they gave more depth or difficulty to the use of the powers... Nuances to show that it at least requires experience or something like that.

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A summary for a TL is like a billboard which advertises your level of translation ability before people read. "Logan travels to the world of pirates, but his cheat seems to be of no use. Fortunately, he met Luffy at the beginning, and I planned to join the StrawHats" While I don't blame people for not knowing English perfectly since it is difficult, the switches between POV and broken structure show the translation isn't great. Still, the story is good and I recommend reading the original for the most content since the translation isn't much better. I encourage the translator to improve more as he progresses through each chapter.

It's good enough. The concept is interesting. Hope you keep it up!

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Honestly, the story is very interesting, the grammar however makes you feel this was written by a 6th grader