Honestly I like the idea of how the mc’s power works but it could have been implemented better in a different situation. Also I absolutely hate when a MC has the perception of a brick completely unaware of what is happening around them.

Good idea executed well until nami joined the crew Mc started to show off his stereotypical Chinese fanfic protagonist personality and everybody else got pushed away into the corner so Mc can have his time with nami

I just don't like the fact that he doesn't know his manga's powers. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Didnt expect the concept to be so interesting. One piece characters enter the manga that the MC draws. First is Luffy entering Akame ga kill. Keep going pls

un truc que je coimprend pas avec les traducteur chinois pourquoi laisser juste traduire et pas changer 2 . 3 mot ou mieux elver toute les exppressions chinoise dans les oeuvres ? CE SERAI tellement mieux je veux dire les gens lise pas le chinois a cause de mis ensemble qui sont bizarre a lire voire cringe c'est juste un conseil , mais si vous traduiser les oeuvres chinoise alors enlever tout ce qui fait chinois , il y aura tout de suite plus de gens et de meilleur note

The amount of errors in grammar and translation are too many. It's almost none edition, not different from MTL, and it became worse the farther you read. Only thing that keeps me to read this is the plot.

I can see it, Luffy is going to rizz up Esdeath.

I like how the story is going. The main character has a cool cheat, draw manga and get rewards for people who enter and get stronger from it. But what I don't like is how fking moronic the mc is. I'm not taking about how he acts but this mfker got a system [Ding!] and didn't even check it because something happened on the ship and then completely forgot he had a system 30 chapters in (the ding happen around chapter 16ish) and still the dude hasn't checked the fking system Overall if the mc wasn't so dumb it would be great. If you like how the mc is oblivious to literally everything going on around them then this book is for you It's like those stupid troupes where the mc is invincible but still thinks he's a mortal without power, like "I'm a cultivation bigshot?" "I swear I'm not the demon lords lackey" etc

Had potential but then the MC just takes everyone’s powers lol the story is complete trash