I think the author forgot that the space bar exists, this fanfic is nothing more than chapter after chapter of run on sentences with no spacing at all. I originally thought it was just a few chapters of mistakes but now I’m convinced that they just don’t know how to type.

我叫佐助，从火影首富到世界之巅 Or in English, My name is Sasuke, from the richest man in Naruto to the top of the world

Honestly I was enjoying this fanfic, as a template system focused on swordsmanship it was interesting, but for the main character to suddenly out of left field get the ability to brainwash a jonin even if you claimed it was a genjutsu, which I don’t think it was ever stated that he possessed, Nah man I’m out next thing you know he’s gonna be a hive mind overlord and this is just gonna be another smut novel.

Another novel copied from FanFiction this one is called Yami: the gamer Kage and it’s by the author Imjusttryingtofindmyway. It is already finished and has 25 chapters with a total word count of 314k.

Mc is a bundle of social anxiety, I started reading this for the interactions between the characters but I think I’ll be dropping it for the lack there of. It’s like every time the author introduces a new person from the game the MC has an internal crisis and chooses to avoid them like the plague.

There’s no character development The story somewhat feels like a journal in the sense that there is almost no emotion involved in anything that happens.

Started out great but once you reach 60 to 80 chapters in it turns into the (next episode of dragon ball z) meaning the next 60 chapters are all one fight. It’s just filler and it’s boring filler at that.

4th wall? What 4th wall, is it tasty?

This isn’t even a Fanfic it’s just an advertisement for the author’s Patreon.

Great novel! I love fishing abilities, unfortunately I can’t continue with this after chapter 19 because it is a completely illogical twist. Well here’s hoping that there’ll be a clone of this novel soon!

Honestly the story started out fine. I like the villain with a plot changing system type of story, but there are so many plot holes and inconsistencies especially in the later chapters I had to give up on reading it before making it to chapter 50. I think it’s a great first draft for a story but the author should probably use it as just that. I would love to see it rewritten and have those plot holes filled.

Uhg I feel sick trying to read this, the spacing is all wrong. I think this might be the first time I’ve ever gotten motion sickness from reading a novel.

I’m all for a multiversal shop type system but I think the author may have picked the wrong target audience to pair with it not to mention the Chinese idioms that really don’t translate well over to English.

The story is decent up until they introduce the fact that there are multiple reincarnated characters all who have fragments of the MC’s system. That in itself doesn’t ruin the story but it’s more the fact that almost all of the rest of the story is written in the perspective of those other reincarnated characters, after reading around 200 chapters I don’t think the author even remembers who the MC is anymore.

The story is just a excuse for the author to vent their necrophilia desires, the entire first world is just him describing how much he wants to have sex with a corpse. The system is fine but the author’s preferences made me want to puke within the first 20ish chapters.

I like the idea of a gatcha power but the fact that it’s a common ability in the world is a disappointment even if his is better. I very much like the world background I’m a huge fan of novels like infinite mana in the apocalypse so a system world with awakeners and randomly appearing dungeons is very appealing. What I absolutely hate is the MC he’s a complete pushover and that alone makes it almost unreadable for me not to mention the fact that he comes with all of his gatcha summons pre-unlocked which completely makes the gatcha aspect pointless it would be better to just call him a summoner.

Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy. Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.

It’s just a copy of a novel on FanFiction.Net, I think it’s called Percy Jackson and the Game. I don’t care if you post it on here but you should at least give credit to the author of the fanfic.

MC goes on and on about not being a simp for the first 5 chapters but then folds like a paper fan in chapter 7 becoming a simp after a single setback. It’s unfortunate because I was looking forward to a new danmachi fanfic but I can already see where this is going so I’m gonna dip here.

Welp it’s unfortunately time to drop this novel oh well it didn’t have much promise anyways…