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Inevitable Road To Divinity

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COMPLETED NOVEL! After the catastrophe that occured on the Earth, he awakens in unfamiliar, another world. To find out more about himself, he has to step on the road full of danger! It's a story about modern young man who has Sex God Divinity and his past selves. *It's a smut novel despite MC hard beginnings, so a lot of smut elements have been used. Every character close to MC(including MC) is more than 18 years old no matter what circumstances.* *InsanelyParanoid has only published this novel, Inevitable Road To Divinity, to webnovel.com! If you are reading on other sites, then you are reading stolen content!* *Every R-18 is done with a grown-up/mature/adult lady. Every female character involved in every 'sexual' content is mature(18+)!* *A lot of gore, brutal and weird R-18 related scenes! Novel is R-18 rated, so expect a lot of dirty and weird humor! MC steps on both paths, good and devil. You can sometimes see the R-18(sex) as punishment. It is rare and not really eerie at all, but it happens sometimes. It's rare though, as the author is a kind man!* *This is a work of fiction! Nothing is related to the reality! Any names, characters, stories or events, are fictitious! Even author's notes, thoughts and comments mustn't be taken seriously!* *This novel is rated 18+ (no one 17 and under allowed). It contains mature adult themes, coarse language, explicit sexual content, and graphic violence. Reader discretion is strongly advised. Please do NOT read if you are under 18 or if you feel uncomfortable with any of these elements.* *Inevitable Road To Divinity by InsanelyParanoid belongs to Webnovel(including their other sites) and is not affiliated with any other site. If you see it anywhere else, then it's pirated and probably changed too, so you won't get that perfect reading experience! Read only here and support an author!* *This story doesn't encourage anyone to commit or force other to commit any actions that happened here. This is a fantasy solely for entertainment purposes!* *Author is bad with numbers, so don't take those seriously.* TAGS: Reincarnation, Harem, Fantasy, Magic, Gods, R-18

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Volumen 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1 :Endrun, the servant who has gone beyond his destiny
Volumen 2 :Kuzan, the unseen humanity prodigy
Volumen 3 :World Breaker - Two Divine Wings Of White Demon
Volumen 4 :The Lightning Family Of Xue Household
Volumen 5 :Resurrection Of Sword Goddess
Volumen 6 :Divine Weapons Enigma

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I've read up to around chap 600 and I definitetly will continue waiting for the updates. I really like this novel, and I praises say it all. However, I wanna leave something that may be of help for the author, and here are a few recommendations: 1. The writing could really make use of some editing, such as on some of the common word spellings i.e. "could" instead of "cloud." Also, some words were misplaced i.e. "like sword" instead of "sword like." Another thing would be the lack of "a" and "the" such as in "I am father" instead of "I am a father." 2. Pseudo names and/or monikers need mitigation. I feel like frequently using "Young one" or "Snow Beauty" always makes the reader think "Who was that again?" Feel free to use pronouns for I think it will greatly improve the writing quality (and also reduce the time needed to type haha.) If author-san still wants to use the aliases, I would prefer them being used as frequently as the real names in the narration, as that will give us time to imprint the name on our heads. 3. Being direct in writing flares up our imaginations more than just leaving it for us to imagine (quite ironic no?) There are times when author-san used "Obviously you know the reason why!" and I felt nice when I really knew it, but felt frustrated when I didn 't know resulting to me not grasping the events. It may be spoonfeeding, but I think being repetitive sometimes would be a great help. 4. In line with #3, the descriptions could really use more specific-ness (And I really like that author-san got better in describing characters in the latest chapters.) The places where the scene happens need a bit more detail such as the color of the room, the placement of the furnitures/obstacles, the POV location, the sights as the eyes extend toward either left or right, etc. You can also utilize mentioning widths and lengths (numbers don't hurt; more so in moderation.) Also you can elaborate on the number of enemies too, and the exact number that died/are left. In terms of describing powers, it can also be a bit useful to use "the shockwave reached 3 kilometers" and the world sizes may also utilize this by comparing to the size of the Earth. 5. The world building is a bit confusing for me. It might help by releasing a helpful chapter for the essential information. I still don't understand a few of the power aquisition and improvements up till now (maybe my comprehension is bad too I guess hehe) 6. There are a few plotholes, but all stories have them right? Just don't forget what happens to the people/buildings/world around the event portrayed. Don't hesitate to mention how the roof collapsed, how buildings in a 100 km radius got blown, how a lot of people ran when this guy appears etc etc. They really get us to feel the events. 7. In line with #6, the R-18 scenes are a little inconsiderate HAHA. There are just times when the MC is walking here then boom the R-18 scenes come and I don't know how the hell they came from the shop to the dark alley. In summary: Don't hide anything from us author-san. Pour everything you imagine into writing. We want to see what you see. We want to know what you know. I f*cking love this novel and I will don anything to help it get even more f*cking good. Love from a loyal reader of yours~ P.s. If I have more suggestions, I will reply them here as well :D Keep writing!

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