AdmiralAlcon

This is plagiarism! The real story is made by Tertius711

Some confrontation with dumbledore and more inventing? Btw keep up the good work!

No problem mate! Like I said, this is one of the best fics I have read. Keep it up!

Ye, it's mostly about the release rate. On this site most people are for the day to day read - as in an update 1/2 days apart from the last. Adding to the fact that the plot is somewhat slow it costs You the intrest in the novel. Now fot the story: the only point so far is the marriage - for me personally, the forced marriage is fine, but some people are fed up with the eastern style fics and that move on Your part probably is too similar to that kind of writing. The rest of the story is very good, if only a little slow. ;) I will still read Your work and give You power stones cuz I think this fic is one of the best I have read so far. So keep up the good work and do not mind the trolls and stuff like that.

"sat" not "hat"?

Yes he didn't know, but he spoke to the snake already.

It's a fanfic... and what if that the pureblood ideas came with brit wizards coming to America? You don't know that in a fanfiction.

"But" should be "both" right? Love your work btw, keep it up man!